I Hate Love Poems

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Just because I write for you

doesn't mean I care

even though I always am

I won't always be there.



I will not be your damsel

search the sunset for my knight

I think that's all pathetic

besides you'd never do it right.



I will not write you love notes

sweet sonnet's of devotion

I might as well be dead to you

I won't show my emotions.



I will not givwe up everything

just like I always do

to see you take it all for granted

twisting the things I felt for you.



Just because i'm writing this

doesn't mean that it's not true

I do so hate love poems

almost as much as I loved you.

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vipervenomnu's picture

Wow......You have a lot of poems. I only had time to read this one, so it kinda set your standard in my mind. Nice job bye the way. You have a poem here that is hard to find on this site. Most people just write and really don't write much of anything because there emotions get to involved. You withdrew, which Poe would say is a good thing. My friend has alot of poems like you. I am passionate about poetry but have not written that much. keep up the good work, maybe you'll go somewhere!

djtj's picture

Nikki,
I have to be straight with you, I went to your love poems folder first but (though I did not read them all) I didn't really find a true love poem there. Now this poem is the most honest of the ones I've read. Nice twist nice rhyme
very good...your love poems are a lot like mine perhaps filled with expected hurt. I wish for you a love in your life that will set your pen free.
Debbie

running_with_rabbits's picture

ok if this were revised for the flow it would be mind blowing, I like the twist at the end!


Much Love

Ashley

Reven Undone's picture

I really liked this.

running_with_rabbits's picture

i love it almost as much as i hate loving people (namely the name we will not sya right now)

ash


Much Love

Ashley