just poetic

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and the words fell onto the page 

 

just as silently as he aged

 

a lost memory is regained

 

when the truth is revealed 

 

and the rains rain

 

 

everything happens in good time

 

life certainly has it's own way to rhyme

 

don't you wish you were still young

 

and could feel the pleasure of the past's rain upon your tongue?

 

 

how does it feel 

 

to live this lie?

 

knowing you'll carry this

 

til your final goodbye

 

 

 

 

8:38 AM 7/6/2013

 

 

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INKSTAIN's picture

Poetic indeed. Food for

Poetic indeed. Food for thought. 

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Glad you thought so,

Glad you thought so, Stain. 

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...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "

 

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Moving poem for sure. Gives

Moving poem for sure. Gives off a depressing/lonely vibe. I don't want to get old! 

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Getting old isn't bad,

Getting old isn't bad, justanotherscreen, but getting old the way the person who i wrote this about is getting old is worse than spending your entire life in prison. I am sure it will last beyond his death. But karma is a worse bitch than any of us.

~peace~


...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "