Glistening snow shapes,
Falling, twirling and dancing,
But forever ice...

Author's Notes/Comments: 

A simple Haiku describing how a snowflakes life works. Contast between life and inactivity of a snowflake, given through human preception, vs. the actually nature of a snowflake.

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saiom's picture

an exqusite haiku... and yet

an exqusite haiku...
even though every day snowflakes melt!
I love your poem



MrCake's picture

Thank you for this nice

Thank you for this nice comment, i hope i will continue to produce poetry up to this caliber.