Love's orbit

People spend a lifetime
on changing who they are,
but fail with evr'y sunshine
it origins way too far,

I lay within my pillow
try'n to rearrange my life,
but heavens' gentle moonglow
spins a gold-woven disguise,

My love goes far beyond you
through your shadow-casting eyes,
while I circle 'round you on cue
You're my highest-staked dice |

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on several levels beautiful

my favorites of the several beautiful lines in the poem

"heavens' gentle moonglow spins a gold-woven disguise,"

"My love goes far beyond you through your shadow-casting eyes,"
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