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I don't know...
I don't know that you'll come back...
I don't know that you still love me...
I don't know if you ever did...
I don't know if you were ever honest with me...
I don't know if I regret everything...
i don't know if my memories are true...
I don't know if love is the same as I thought...
I don't know if life is as fun as they say...
I don't know if I'm really free to choose...
I don't know if I'm even sane...
I don't know Real from make-believe...
I don't know what I want or I think I want...
I don't know if I am normal or different...
I don't know what I'm feeling or thinking...
I just don't know anymore...
the world is such a confusing place.
3/2/10
Thanks for the critique on my page, yours is the first one I've had in like 2 years or more, so thanks.
I like this poem of yours because it reminds me of something I wrote that was similar called 'I wish'.
I love your use of repetition and how you enforce the sense of confusion and loss with the continuation dots at the end of each line, very effective. I hope that if you can find youself again in this world that there is hope for the rest of us. Us writers have got to shed some light and truth in this world so keep writing and good luck over the rainbow ;)
*Katie*