The Star

A star that was once
Sitting, so beautiful,
In that dark heaven,
Fell from her crystal
Throne and landed
In the burning pit of desire.

The desire burned so strong that
The star lost herself
Within it's blinding light,

Author's Notes/Comments: 

This tends to happen to the brightest stars... Such a waste.

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Katieray's picture

Kyra you have a wonderful

Kyra you have a wonderful talent for saying so much with a minimum of words I really enjoy that! I really like all of your work.

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Thank you so much!!! I'm so glad that you enjoy my work!!!! Thank you, both of you, for reading and reviewing my work. Y'all just made my day :)


wisdom's picture


so sort and yet so true but also so deep wow i like............

wisdom comes from God

saiom's picture

what a powerful metaphor....

what a powerful metaphor.... can fallen stars be like fallen angels?