Echoes of your voice ring
Feelings I've been keeping
I drank this blue bottle
My heart didn't settle
The laughters we had
They make me feel bad
Tragic are these stories
Our tale didn't exist
I thought I'd be drunk
Just sleep on this bunk
But I couldn't help picturing you
And I couldn't stop thinking of you
Of how you are tonight
I think of you a lot
If you are just alright
'Cause honestly I'm not
I went to your house today
You were not there again
There are things I want to say
Things a phone cannot send
Face me just this time
Don't walk away like you do
Just talk and stay only to
Make me feel alright
I beg you, don't go
I want this to close
There are things I want you to know
How I felt way before the cold
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Read as many of the other poets on postpoems as you can to develop your style and grasp of English. It will take years, but is worth the trip. Be well, write a poem a day at least and have someone look it over, then post it. Continue to comment on other poets and they will respond in kind - Love and Prayers on your journey into the literary arts. (Something other than love poetry might help you to grow). ~Lady A~
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