When I Smell The Rain

 

When I woke up in the morning today,
I knew it wouldn't be a sunny day.
Because I saw dark clouds all around,
Up in the sky with scary sounds.
I brushed, bathed and got ready to go,
But on my skin I felt a raindrop
This is how the atmosphere changed
This is how I met with your memories again

 

You were in my mind all the time on my lane
And it felt the same outside when,
I took a deep breath and smelled the rain
I wish you were here to dance with me in this moment
And we could convince God and take this rain on rent

 

We are both wet and smiling at each other
I have the whole story,
But I'm scared to tell you further.
We would run, we would dance,
We would love and we would laugh
It would go on until the night.
Just imagine that would make us feel so alive.
I could touch your hair, I could touch your skin.
You would try hard to escape but I'd always win..

 

After the rain,
Under the rainbow, on the grass we both would lie
And packed our happiness,
In the bags of our love and to this world, say goodbye
We would run away leaving this world and all those pain
This is what all goes on on my mind when I smell the rain



 

Author's Notes/Comments: 

another fast written poem... i didnt put much effort so..

 

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bishu's picture

Gohil dear

Dear Gohil, 

                 The picture reminds me of the rain dance song of "3 Idiots" Really good poets don't need much time to write poems. Poetry writing must be effortless and come out from the mind directly. Rhyming may sometimes prove futile. Ha ha, I am doctrinating as though I write too well. Carry on Gohil. God bless. Put in a prayer for the U'khand mishap victims.. Bye.


©bishu 

 

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yupp sure sir:) and thanks

yupp sure sir:) and thanks alot for reading this

nightlight1220's picture

Amazingly awesome!

Amazingly awesome!


...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "

 

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Thanks alot:)

Thanks alot:)

lovelife123's picture

Aww this is so cute :') love

Aww this is so cute :') love it!


"Everybody is a genuis. But if you judge a fish on it's ability to climb a tree, it will live it's whole life believing that it is stupid"
Albert Einstein

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Thanks alot naz:)

Thanks alot naz:)