Let our Love run wild
Evenly spread like the snow across the frozen lakes.
Have the courage & eyes.
Though some may hear, not all will see
Fear is the sunlit peak of mt Everest.
I'm a fire eyes searing all those who have courage, eyes, faith, & love the evenly sky, sunlit oceans; like mountain peak
light beams.
The repetition of certain
The repetition of certain words definitely adds to the musical structure of this poem. This comes close, I think, to the verse music that Mallarme sought in his poems that founded the Symbolist movement.
J-Called