Let our Love run Wild

Let our Love run wild

 

Evenly spread like the snow across the frozen lakes.

 

Have the courage & eyes.

 

Though some may hear, not all will see

 

Fear is the sunlit peak of mt Everest.

 

I'm a fire eyes searing all those who have courage, eyes, faith, & love the evenly sky, sunlit oceans; like mountain peak

light beams.

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The repetition of certain

The repetition of certain words definitely adds to the musical structure of this poem.  This comes close, I think, to the verse music that Mallarme sought in his poems that founded the Symbolist movement.


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