Down Pour

Although I'm far gone.

Seas away.

You're my savior now.


I'd love to be in your arms right now.

I want to feel the night, the noon, the day.

Could never touch someone.

A thousand miles away.

I'd keep you here.

Standing in this down pour.

I'll hold your hand-

Slowly feeding the flame.

Breathe you in. 

Consuming your vibe-

You soak in. 



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BEAUTIFUL! its pouring rain

BEAUTIFUL! its pouring rain here at the moment... it just fit so right with the mood. great work!

Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

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allets's picture


You have a flair for setting, scenario is always present in your work - nice touch, this downpouring and grasp of what a last line should be  ~Lady A~



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Thank you!!

Thank you!!