The Lady OF My Soul

The Lady Of My Soul



From deep within her bright eyes

and in her sultry laugh

come tender soul vibrations

where spells of love are cast.

With graceful taste and wisdom

through strife or peace and hope

there lives my sweet enchantress

The lady of my soul.



Her rare and mystic mindset

a lighthouse for the truth

sends passionate love beacons

to the sea of stranded youth

With words of gathered knowledge

Inwoven in her speech

with mercy and true vision

she speaks of faith in leaps.



Her look is deep with dreaming

of a love that cancels tears.

Her eyes are filled with wonder

and unpermitted fears.

For she's come down from heaven

and all the lives she passed

are vehicles of purpose

that wait to bring her back.



And when her needed tableaux

protects her special doves

with teeming flair and purpose

she triumphs in her love.

In calm she waits out worry

when time for changing grows

and there's no other mortal

more patient with her own.



Deep in the heart of my soul

lies the jewell of her worth.

where destiny has brought her

to deal with love or hurt.

In bold and sudden fashion

she rises from the fold

to state her love with spirit

the lady of my soul.



She knows dry eyes are hiding

the feelings in this man.

while sweetness of her merit

within my pulse expands.

Her armor or her softness

both stir my mind like fire

no quick reluctant purpose

can quell my deep desire.



With cheer and expectation

and time for all things born

she heartens the disheartened

and comforts the forlorn.

She's gentle and all-seeing

and mirrors her repose

with love for curing sadness

the lady of my soul.



Her words are wonderous music

that warm like winds of spring.

And her faith is like the twilight

the end of day can bring.

Her senusous naked valleys

where sensation stirs my bones

are places where I take

the finest journey home.



And year by year she's gifted

with the will to share her source

Her love of future scanning

the path of evermore.

And back from all life's setbacks

she springs to keep me whole

with sorceries of gladness

the lady of my soul.


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S74RW4RD's picture

Beautifully, exquisitely done!


Starward

Madame Amanda De Carneiro's picture

very well worded... i felt the depth of this poem emediatly....very nice job....

Amy L. Maybury's picture

How compelling ...poet.

serene's picture

Most glad to discover your halls of poetry. ^_^ I've been around a few of your poems yet, and they truly inspired me. This one captured my attention. I find this elegant, your words flowing in every stanza. I just read it on and on and I was not aware that I've already come to the last line. That's how captivating your poem is. ^_^ I have to read more! All the best!

Daphne Sullivan's picture

Eric, you're right.....this is beautiful! I printed it and stuck it in another book that I'm reading. This is one that needs to be read again...(and again). You're a very talented poet.....I'm glad I found your work and will definitly be back to read more!

Daniel Cole's picture

This poem is magical in its flowing yet intricate design, I'm going to read it a few more times yet! You are a truely gifted writer (no pun intended). Congratz on the top 10! Have fun,

Roz Turner's picture

Hi Wow!!! This was an awesome piece... had to read it over again and again... true poetry at it's best. Great work and thanks for sharing. Roz :)

Linda Moyer's picture

Eric, I can safely say I can see the reason this was chosen at one of the Top Ten. This is a magnificent piece of lifes' tribute to your wonderful lady. She must be your life. It is wonderful for a woman to see that a man really appreciates her as you do. Keep up the good work. Linda

Donker Man's picture

This is a beautiful poem that made me think for a long time! From the pen of a gifted poet!

Michelle Noel's picture

What an exceptional poem her. So well deserving of the top ten. Utterly beautiful. It flows...it fly's....its just so beautiful. Michelle

Julie Malcolm's picture

this one made my heart feel like it was threatening to break my ribs... what a poem, speaking of true love while at the same time not overstating it. love is incredibly hard to put into words but you seemed to have no trouble 8) good one. congrats on the top ten, i will be reading more from you!

darkpool's picture

A finely woven tapestry of emotions, with patterns repeating in delicate rhythms, and images evoking beauty at every turn. A sensuous and magnificent collage of verse. Keep doing whatever that thing is you're doing that makes you rhyme this way! Ken

Christine M's picture

So glad for you that this one made Top Ten. It is truely beatiful. You rarely see a man express his feelings in poetry and to tell the lady of soul publically how he feels is even more rare. I do hope that she's still part of your life and appreciates you for that which you are willing to express in words. Keep up with the poem writing dedicated to this lady, will you?

Deborah Russell's picture

Eric...this is a grand piece of work. Congratulations for the Top Ten...

Rachelle Wiegand's picture

had to come back after reading again and say that this is such great writing. The kind of poem that I want to leave behind something for other readers like: read it again, take notes. Really wonderful talent.

Rachelle Wiegand's picture

Eric, Wow! What a gorgeous poem. Beautifully crafted. Exquisite. She must be quite a special lady :) I especially loved these lines: through strife or peace and hope there lies my sweet enchantress The lady of my soul. I loved them all, actually :) A great, spirited write and read! Provokes emotion in the reader. Captivating.

DaddyO's picture

Eric, this flows with amazement, the sort of praiseworthy tribute poem I enjoy, one that elevates a tender woman's value to the levels only we, as true romantic men, can appreciate. The rhyme was wonderful, not forced, and made the read exciting (coming from me, the master of frantic rhyme, makes this even more of a compliment). I am sure she is either smiling ear to ear, eyes closed, ready to drift like a Autumn-kissed leaf into your arms OR running away in terror to the safety of some thug's shiny blue Camaro, never to look back (sometimes they do that too)

Deborah Russell's picture

How very beautiful this was...such tenderness and love. I really like this one...thanks for sharing. Great work...lovely!