Are like scalding hot drops,
of melting metal.
They sear their way through my skin.
I cannot bear the sight of her tears,
So I turn my back and walk away.
And let her cry.
So she drowns her tears.
In Brandy, Vodka, Rum,
And Wine Coolers.
So do I...
I wait
Sadly
In the darkness
until she is too drunk to notice.
She sleeps.
And I crawl from my hotel room bed.
Into the bathroom
and drink.
The scalding liquid like fire...
Like Mother's tears.
And then I fill it with water,
shake the bottle
Hope
she won't notice.
Then I lay down and
Listen
To the sobs from my mother's soul.
Though she remains asleep she still
Cries.
Does she cry because of
Me?
Or does she cry for
Me?
Or does she simply cry because she
Knows
that I have become like her
Drowning my sorrows
In scalding liquid
That tastes of
Mother's Tears.....
Reminds me of my ex, how we
Reminds me of my ex, how we hid things from each other. It makes it easier when someone else feels the same
;-)
Great write! Well crafted & connects.
I know too well....
I know too well.... wonderfully expressed and eternally felt by all who have mothered another life---be it human, animal, plant.
...............
...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."
"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "
:)
I really enjoyed this poem. The transistion of the alcohol to the tears was beautiful. I do feel like useing the different colours for the font takes away from the poems impact a lot. The light blue is hard to read and having different colours almost makes it seem like the setneces are not conected.
Thanks so much for the share
looking forward to seeing more
Much Love
Ashley
I'm glad you liked it and I
I'm glad you liked it and I meant to change the colors a long time ago i just never got around to it
:) keep writing, looking
:)
keep writing, looking forward to seeing more stuff from you
Much Love
Ashley
I missed the first two lines
Got the transition and it works, but take the time to change the colors - I miss things with these old eyes. Topical and necessary write - intertwining tears and oh say wine coolers and tears like molten metal. What is "yead"? So much here is fab. Look forward to reading more - Allets
I appreciate your feedback
I appreciate your feedback and am glad that you enjoyed the poem. And it was meant to be "yeah" not yead. I typed the poem from my phone....