Pain and Heartache

I hate the sound of your voice

I hate the sight of tears,

I've never hated so much of nothing,

Throughtout my teenage years.

I cannot stand the sight of blood,

It makes me want to cringe,

I cannot stand my body,

Nor my food eating binge.

I hate when I fall in love,

All it brings is pain.

I hate thoughts of you that plague me,

My tears that fall like rain.

WHy can't you simply disappear,

and take your memories,

I promise i will not miss you,

Though you make temperature drop 50 degrees.

Please just go away,

Leave me ALONE!.

I do not want to marry you,

Or live in your broken home.

You smash my heart to pieces,

with that smile on your face,

But even if its facing someone else...

My heart can't help but race...

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nightlight1220's picture

This reads so fast and

This reads so fast and furious...LOL. I love it. It so personifies teen angst. Very passionate.

...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "


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Feedback :)

I appreciate your feedback so thank you very much! I try with all I write.

readmy5tuff's picture

Very good write

Very good write

DazedByLife's picture

Thank you

Thank you Smile

allets's picture

Cliche Uses

I adore your use of cliches - they say it all for you very well and reflect your mind-emotion-artistic proficienciesquite well Wink ~~Lady A~~