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Love at First Kiss
In her eyes,
I found my soul,
The heart she gave me,
Made me whole,
And when we met,
She took my breath
She made me wonder,
Have I met death?
For she was so pretty,
Her allure seemed serial,
Her heart magnanimous,
And her beauty ethereal,
I may not know everything,
But at least I know this:
When it came to passion,
All I needed was her kiss.
Touching. I like this very
Touching. I like this very much.
Cute doesn't begin to
Cute doesn't begin to describe it but it floats around in this poem somewhere between deep passion and heartfelt emotion ;) lovely can we see more?
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
Hahahaha thank you! The
Hahahaha thank you! The support I've received for my first poem has given me some inspiration... I have another poem, but so far the most I have completed is the idea/theme of the poem. I appreciate the kind words however!
Joyous Write
Way to go - so much work it paid off nicely. I have been writing poetry for over 40 years and this is a fine piece - heartfelt and happy. - allets -
Thank you! It was my first
Thank you! It was my first actual poem, so hearing this will get me enthusiastic about continuing poetry in the future!