Would you lock up my love
Like you want to be tied to me?
Lock up my womb
Like you’ve locked up my heart?
Shackle my soul to a ring?
Do you want me to stay
For love or because I’m in chains?
Men and their fences
Around land, animals, and fingers
Men invented prisons
Both of the body and the soul
Will you set me free?
Is love its own prison
Or its own hell?
I kinda saw where you were going. You didn't use any rhyme scheme,but thats ok. Escpecially the last question you compared to things that are alike. Please explain to me what you are meaning here. I dont mean to sound mean. Really, your other works are pretty good.
Quite profound.
J-9th94
i love this one
i do identify with each word said here
but on the contrary
i know a complete opposite to this:
a woman who chains her "property"
i condemn both
thanks for sharing
salam