I
Welcome, children of all ages!
Welcome
to Cire Luey's Utopia Factory!
I am excited
so electric --
I have invited you,
yes, specifically YOU
to tour my grand factory!
Come, come now
don't be shy!
This building was made for you
as an experiment of what we
humans can do!
So without further ado,
come in, come in!
Our first stop on the tour
is the Homo Village.
Hey, don't snicker!
That's not what this is!
We all come from the genus "Homo",
it's Latin for "Human".
Now, this Homo Village has citizens
of various ethnicities,
melanin shades, and identities!
All are neighbors and brothers...
with each other.
We've hit a snag, I must confess --
please, PLEASE
don't touch her headdress;
don't mock his routine;
watch your microagressions.
I won't be held liable for any violence. You see
these Homos, though like you
don't like you.
They've agreed to give as good as they get --
provide them respect, and you'll be welcomed;
poke and tease them, well, at your own risk.
You are outsiders
and though I vouch for you,
I will not protect you... we will lose
some of you.
So grab your belongings
and your severed pieces
while we head deeper into the factory.
II
This room is the Government Room:
the elders of the Homos congregate here
and determine policy.
Between you and me,
there's a bit of disruption among the ranks.
Certain tribes in the village
feel disenfranchised
and there's a well-known rumor
of corruption and lobbying.
As Deus Ex Ambassador,
I have offered my observations
of political refreshment or dissolution,
but I have been respectfully assured
the model is perfect --
it's the Homos that are flawed.
The elders blame the tribes,
the tribes blames the elders,
along with intragroup conflicts.
Please, don't sneer or roll your eyes --
whom are you to judge?
Have you seen your lives with
fresh, visiting eyes?
Now come along,
there is more to see.
III
Here is the Education Room,
where little Homos learn
reading, writing, arithmetic,
everything they need to participate meaningfully
in tribal society.
They also learn science,
history, politics, and basics of economy.
These... aren't as important, I think.
The little Homos show little interest
in subjects like these.
A small minority are completely enamored
and pursue secondary education,
acquiring specific tribal recognition.
But even these gifted little Homos
develop specific interests
and display understandable indifference
toward 'useless' subjects.
As ambassador
I have played voice for the offspring
expressing the facts as I objectively see them.
The parents look to the elders,
whom created education policy
and the elders disagree, respectively.
"These are well-rounded curricula,
to ensure our young grow mentally strong!
They need these skills to participate meaningfully!"
When asked if they, themselves,
remembered any elementary science
there was an uncomfortable silence.
Finally, one elder spoke up:
"Why is science important to government?"
The irony was lost in the roaring agreement,
and demonization of educators
for failing students...
IV
Speaking of Homo economics
we're entering the Economy Room!
Here, the masters of major Homo markets
conduct business, away from the Homo villagers.
In this room, cost of goods are discussed,
currency changes hands,
markets rise and fall.
The Homo economy is modeled after
laissez faire capitalism...
in theory.
In practice, however...
certain major markets
that employ many Homos
received public funds
to cover some bad 'investments'.
The elders agreed the decision was sound
to save a market and many jobs.
When asked how this decision settles with laissez faire,
respect was dropped
and I was told to 'mind my own business'.
Again, I was discouraged away
from critiquing the system --
it was the Homos' fault; SOME Homo's fault.
V
The last room,
I openly admit, I am ashamed.
It was never my design
to include a prison.
The elders broke me down --
they persistently claimed
the criminals needed isolation.
I argued criminals only exist
in the presence of a state;
by this point,
the Homos no longer hid
their distaste of my observations.
"Without a state, chaos reigns.
Shall we revert to brutish
neanderthalensis?"
No Homo would accept
that neanderthalensis
was most likely intelligent...
Reluctantly,
I built this room to harbor
the worst of the worst.
"Not those whom are found worse than you, nor
those whose very existence may be worse for you,
or your interests."
But my warnings and objections went
unheeded.
This room is full BEYOND capacity.
Judges are found accepting kickbacks
for passing harsher sentences
on disenfranchised Homos.
Yet, despite this corruption
the Homo justice system is under no
investigation, with no impending reform.
This room... has no purpose
other than profit, and enslavement.
It seems you are the last ticket holder;
maybe you could fix this mess.
Your eyes lack confidence
but your heart beats
strong.
I have faith in your purity --
it reminds me of my own.
Join me in my elevator
as I show you to your throne.
END
Cire Luey's Utopia
Very good write
But you lost me in room V.
" For a lack of solutions,
The problem can not be solved ".
What is your solution ?
KS
Rhetorical questions do not expect an answer
Because
No satisfaction will be found.