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wolf love
I am your animal
I am the wolf
your hunter and capture of my heart
I will hunt for you
and stay by your side once I have hunted you down
I will bite you
mark you as my own
with my tender nip
If the moon is full
I will howl for you
I become the wolf
for you this night
just to taste the bitter
sweet bite of your blissful kiss
In my wolf skin
I seek your soft touch
I follow the trail
of your slow and steady breath
The pretedar is now the prey
You wrap your arms around me
Captured by your embrace
my heart beats in sync with yours
a wolfs love is the hunters heart
living in the wolf's chest is the quick beat as the heat rises to my cheeks.
-Destiny
I really like this
It's incredibly intimate and it's a great piece for your first post!
The poems is choppy and
The poems is choppy and confusing, hard to follow and I'll admit I have a hard time telling what your message is, but nonetheless it's promising and shows possible potential. Whatever you do, don't stop writing.
Long days and pleasant nights
Diamond
enjoyed
As a lover of the creatures of the night I love this poem
Nice rhythmn but the tenses
Nice rhythmn but the tenses are confusing are you the wolf and they are the wolf too? Or is it a wolf and other character? Either way i still enjoyed reading it but did change the tenses to suit myself :) will inbox you with more details if you like just let me know cheers SS
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
For A First Post
A lot going on, enjoyed. The more poetry u read, the better your spelling will improve - mine did, and still does improve. Welcome to Postpoems. Encore. Be advised, I have not seen this much critique on a poem in a long time. The poets really liked this one! And so did I. - allets
spacing to single pacing would be good - you have to go in and manually delete them.
captor, predator and king's I think you meant