Floating in Tears
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Tears come as dewdrops on the early summer morn
At that very moment the eternal flowers are born
Tears from above sending her loved bloomers
For only a few days to the desecrated Earth
For a moment friend think is all it is worth
Just to decorate our gardens and balcony pot
Don’t you think flowers deserve a better lot ?
[inspiration from Mr Ramesh Rai and Ms Seema Devi on Facebook]
Wonderful!
Quite wonderfully penned my esteemed friend.
Please do pray for Carl E Vance
cevance as he is known on PP. Thanks for your comments Bondhu
©bishu
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Mr. Bishu,
Many people float in tears all through their life and sink in it. They become mentally and physically weak losing all hope; but the dew drop like tears in your poem make the earth bloom, taking into confidence even the balcony pot plant. Well said. The words look fabulous when used by Mr. Bishu.
Ben
Please do pray for cevance Mr Ben Sir
this was just a sweeping thought when I came to know that Carl was not keeping well
©bishu
Nice bloomers, Mr Bishu'
Nice bloomers, Mr Bishu'
"Deepinyourdreams"
Thank you Mr Deepdreams
Thanks a lot
©bishu