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Tears come as dewdrops on the early summer morn

At that very moment the eternal flowers are born

Tears from above sending her loved bloomers

For only a few days to the desecrated Earth

For a moment friend think is all it is worth

Just to decorate our gardens and balcony pot

 

Don’t you think flowers deserve a better lot ?

 

[inspiration from Mr Ramesh Rai and Ms Seema Devi on Facebook]

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<p><strong><em>My postpoem and facebook friend Mr Carl E Vance is very very sick. Please do pray for him to get well and painless. I place a bunch of spring flowers at your bedside wishing you well my friend afar. We will meet on 1-1-2060 at Poets Island................................ Thats a promise Carl</em></strong></p>

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last updated 30 March 2015 - 9:04am
©30 March 2015 - 8:58am — bishu
30 March 2015 - 12:56pm — KingofWords
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Wonderful!

Quite wonderfully penned my esteemed friend.

31 March 2015 - 7:24am — bishu
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Please do pray for Carl E Vance

cevance as he is known on PP. Thanks for your comments Bondhu

©bishu 

 

30 March 2015 - 12:50pm — pbenarumairaj
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Mr. Bishu,

Many people float in tears all through their life and sink in it.  They become mentally and physically weak losing all hope; but the dew drop like tears in your poem make the earth bloom, taking into confidence even the balcony pot plant. Well said. The words look fabulous when used by Mr. Bishu.

Ben

31 March 2015 - 7:25am — bishu
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Please do pray for cevance Mr Ben Sir

this was just a sweeping thought when I came to know that Carl was not keeping well

©bishu 

 

30 March 2015 - 10:39am — deepinyourdreams
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Nice bloomers, Mr Bishu'

Nice bloomers, Mr Bishu'

"Deepinyourdreams"

31 March 2015 - 7:21am — bishu
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Thank you Mr Deepdreams

Thanks a lot

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