My Other Half

You are the logic to my fantasy,
The humor to my furrowed brow,
You opened my eyes so I could see,
And made my frown turn upside down.
I love you so much it aches,
But not in a sorrowful way,
Like the feeling you get when
Someone takes your breath away.
For these reasons I see you,
Not as better, oh no....
You are my other half...
The one who makes me whole.
Brandy Noelle Souza
7-15-2013

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Dedicated to my husband

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nightlight1220's picture

That's nice Brandy. I enjoyed

That's nice Brandy. I enjoyed that thoroughly...thoroughly. 

 

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...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "

 

b.n.souza's picture

Ty for the compliment :) I'm

Ty for the compliment :) I'm glad you enjoyed it!!

Jesster's picture

Aw. I hope you share these

Aw. I hope you share these poems with him. They're so sweet.

off topic...

How's the heat out there in Council Bluffs?


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b.n.souza's picture

I do actually...I type them

I do actually...I type them on his Facebook page when I'm writing them. Heat...ugh....must not get any hotter or I will die haha. actually, past two days haven't been so bad...mid 80's or so. Ty for the comments!!