What is this Thing?

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Love and Pain

What is this thing?

I’ve forgotten its name

A numbing sensation

A tangible shiver

Weighted wade through a river

Against a rush of wonderment

Bubbling current of excitement

Overflow of impulse

under tow of doubt

almost to the edge of commencement

… reaching the bank of consummation

Crawling out to conclusion

Such an overwhelming spatial summation

Now which trail of pursuance?

Author's Notes/Comments: 

I thought I had forgotten what it felt like....A nice trip back to normalcy, even if for just a moment....

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The conscious recgnition of a

The conscious recognition of a subconscious wish...emotion surfacing.

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...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "

 

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Who Wants To Be Normal?

At eleven years old I took a rocket off normal and never looked back. That's why my comments are "odd" and usually invasive - no sense of norm, politic, appropriately sub anything - just out there - being. I heard, "...even if for just a moment..." Appreciated the write ~A~

 

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