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georgeschaefer commented on: LAST INK by georgeschaefer 5 years 3 weeks ago
gracias: gracias
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georgeschaefer commented on: COMPLIANCE by georgeschaefer 5 years 3 weeks ago
thank you.  glad someone gets: thank you.  glad someone gets the joke
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lyrycsyntyme commented on: Kracked Haiku by allets 5 years 3 weeks ago
You fluidly sowed our: You fluidly sowed our existential planetary existence together. : )
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Starward commented on: Catheter Change by owlcrkbrg 5 years 3 weeks ago
This was amazing to read: This was amazing to read because I am in the same situation.  An internal spinal injury in November 2019 caused the original problem.  I used to dread the monthly exchange to such an extent that I actually have an anti-anxiety pill to take for each appointment, but the last several times have been much easier because of desensitization.  Hopefully the consultation I have next month will result in a supra-pubic placement (which will require a bit of surgery) but will remove the physical and psychological discomfort of having that tube where it presently is.  Because my kidneys create a good deal of sediment, my catheter has clogged several times---which is a pain I cannot find sufficient words to describe.  It has required visits to the ER, but now we have the means to flush the catheter which, if successful (which is not always), avoids the ER visit.
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Starward commented on: Shade Cradles by Callis.at.the.Palace 5 years 3 weeks ago
I like your imagery: I like your imagery throughout the poem, and that final stanza is excellent!
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Starward commented on: Kracked Haiku by allets 5 years 3 weeks ago
Yes, I really liked them. : Yes, I really liked them.  And I hope you will post them not only here but elsewhere, as they need to be read by many others . . . especially that tilted earth haiku.  Wow!
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allets commented on: Kracked Haiku by allets 5 years 3 weeks ago
Fractured Haiku: Is a site G. schaefer posts on aka anerican haiku (pronounced Hike!)- maybe I should submit them. Too tired. Novelled 1p-530p today. Glad u liked the tilted earth. ~A~
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Starward commented on: Kracked Haiku by allets 5 years 3 weeks ago
Now these are some mighty: Now these are some mighty fine haiku.  Although I do not normally care for those that break the 5/7/5 count, these are certainly an excellent exception to that preference . . . especially the haiku about the blue earth's tilt:  that one is stunningly, and exquisitely, perfect.
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allets commented on: LAST INK by georgeschaefer 5 years 3 weeks ago
Moment: Captured!
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allets commented on: Waiting In The Wings by saiom 5 years 3 weeks ago
Read About: Like the towers in 2001, rivited to the news. Tom Hanks'svmovie was equally captivating. 
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Starward commented on: Tiresias by KingofWords 5 years 3 weeks ago
You are most welcome, sir.: You are most welcome, sir.
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georgeschaefer commented on: BORED OUT OF MY MIND by georgeschaefer 5 years 3 weeks ago
I do catch free at noon: I do catch free at noon almost every Friday
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georgeschaefer commented on: EYE CONTACT by georgeschaefer 5 years 3 weeks ago
I probably should have said: I probably should have said hello but I was way too shy
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Starward commented on: *Every One Of You Hath A Psalm, Hath A Doctrine* by Starward-Led 5 years 3 weeks ago
Thank you for those words.  I: Thank you for those words.  I am struggling to organize my day around these verses. It is difficult to acquire the habit, but I hope to keep pressing onward.
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patriciajj commented on: Hawaiian Breadfruit by saiom 5 years 3 weeks ago
So that's why I've never had: So that's why I've never had the pleasure of tasting it. A charming metaphor that has me completely sold on this rare fruit. 
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