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allets commented on: Thorns by lyrycsyntyme 5 years 3 weeks ago
In My Limited Experience: You cannot escape Civilizationists. They're everywhere!  Great write! Enjoyed how yr brain forms lines. Lady A .
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allets commented on: Now I know how my parents felt on Christmas by MvnK 5 years 3 weeks ago
Celebration: Each breath each lowering and raising of an eye lash equals history made. . Be well. "broken deams mended" yeah. Lady A
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lyrycsyntyme commented on: OLD POLITICIANS by georgeschaefer 5 years 3 weeks ago
No, it doesn't. Though, I: No, it doesn't. Though, I think at the state and federal level the two parties are so deeply controlled by the same or at least similar entities that it's really an exercise in futility, either way. We just had an apocalyptic desperation displayed by much of the two major voting populations in the last presidential election and, essentially, nothing has changed despite the names swapping out.
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georgeschaefer commented on: OLD POLITICIANS by georgeschaefer 5 years 3 weeks ago
It also doesn't help that too: It also doesn't help that too many voters blindly vote for their own party regardless of candidate's qualities or qualifications
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saiom commented on: Eastern Nights by grimfate 5 years 3 weeks ago
reaction: lovely lovely
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Starward commented on: Rainforest of a Kiss by lyrycsyntyme 5 years 3 weeks ago
I applaud the way this poem: I applaud the way this poem develops the metaphor to a very powerful level.  I also like the way the last lines double-back to the first lines, like the repetition of a symphony's first theme at the end of the final movement.   
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lyrycsyntyme commented on: Frankincense by saiom 5 years 3 weeks ago
The Power: Someone once sang "that's the power of love." An entertaining song, for sure, but your words do capture the magic of that power. You really draw in not just the emotions, but the physical senses of sight, smell, and touch with "By his halo has hatred incensed / become sacred fragrant frankincense". That, to me, is a really great pair of lines. Memorable and meaningful, for sure.
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Starward commented on: + 1ST POEMS: Written To Pray To Always Praise The Lord by Starward-Led 5 years 3 weeks ago
Thank you for the: Thank you for the compliment.  Although I am not sure what the reference to Archibald meands, I do appreciate the kind words.
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patriciajj commented on: Archibald by patriciajj 5 years 3 weeks ago
Thank you for your beautiful: Thank you for your beautiful soulprints. 
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lyrycsyntyme commented on: He Must Not Be Much Of A Poet by Starward-Led 5 years 3 weeks ago
Your perception, and the: Your perception, and the comfort to ripple the waters a bit that comes with it, I would say is spot on, and I feel a similiar and most unique endearment towards Postpoems in part due to this. We have to work things out, out loud, sometimes. And, for how ever I could aid in that through sharing in the discussion, I'm glad that I caught sight of your poem yesterday. Your rediscovered metaphor is a great example of how our written past often reteaches us something in the future.   You know, it's easy, and even necessary, to spot and try to confront the difficulties, challenges, blockades and mere unpleasantries of one's own time. But, with working through these things - and being open - there we can find also the beauties, the wonders of our time. Such as the reality that we're actively seeing and participating in the building work of this digital book of Poetry. Has there ever been a thicker book of unchained works, or one that has challenged us to explore what poetry is more than this? I don't know, but I think we're blessedly in unique and meaningful territory here. : )
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saiom commented on: STRANGERS by joy 5 years 3 weeks ago
beautiful message:   wonderful poem It makes me think an old book store could be the theater of action in a movie or play  
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saiom commented on: amateur hour by Pungus 5 years 3 weeks ago
  May God materialize money:   May God materialize money for you so that you can follow your heart enriching the world  
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saiom commented on: James by teresa_r 5 years 3 weeks ago
reaction:   God heal you quickly You have a guardian angel who has touched down on earth
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saiom commented on: half my heart in pennsylvania by tallsquirrelgirl 5 years 3 weeks ago
Forests Of Penn:   May all states and lands have as many trees per sq mile as Pennsylvania.. One wonders what your other beloved half is
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saiom commented on: Life is a Candle by RomeonJuliet113 5 years 3 weeks ago
reminder:     beautiful... you remind that the light is not extinguished until God wills it
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