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patriciajj commented on: Melodies XLIX; In DownHome's Shadow, These Words Still Fall by Starward-Led 5 years 6 days ago
What a pleasant surprise to: What a pleasant surprise to find another addition to this heart-stopping collection. In an appropriately serpentine style that oozes mystery and subtle dread, you take us where "nothing quite alive" can thrive and unthinkable secrets are hidden "between or underneath imposing stones."    The last line seems constructed to open the door of the imagination to continuing possibilities in the moldering, soul-crushing symbol of small town oppression.    Superb chills. 
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patriciajj commented on: Finding Religion in Sperryville (In Memory of the Victims of Racial Injustice) by patriciajj 5 years 6 days ago
Your comment is a great honor: Your comment is a great honor and validation of my vision. My deepest gratitude. 
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patriciajj commented on: Pilgrimage to Sperryville by patriciajj 5 years 6 days ago
What a gorgeous and: What a gorgeous and fulfilling comment. Thank you so much! 
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saiom commented on: Castle home by Seeker 5 years 6 days ago
  Each person who reads this:   Each person who reads this deep deep poem would take away something different.   For me it is a perfect encapsulation of what hearthurt there must have been in being a Jew in the 1930's and early 40's in Germany.
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saiom commented on: Pilgrimage to Sperryville by patriciajj 5 years 6 days ago
Magnificent:   'another sky bleeds the memory of day, wrings out each cloud like a rag.'   'Michelangelo clouds, angel-spun'   'And then there is the sky after it has bled the innocence of morning'   'others come   to drink the mountain's heart like sassafras tea, perhaps absorb its wisdom and its wild strength'   'I take dictation from rivers and liquid mountains.'   'clocks that never take a breath and glass mazes that don't know how to pray like the mountains do.'   'the way a distant valley can diffuse you with its bottomless blue,'   you have done the mining and we without doing any work can see the sparkling jewels
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saiom commented on: Finding Religion in Sperryville (In Memory of the Victims of Racial Injustice) by patriciajj 5 years 6 days ago
  Your exquisite sensitivity:   Your exquisite sensitivity and compassion 'I knew God could be found in the voices of rain or the eyes of a dog,'  one perfect line among many      
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saiom commented on: faceless by Pungus 5 years 6 days ago
 I was thinking how few:   I was thinking how few people would take the time and trouble you took in bringing the avocado trees out and then in.. how few people are sensitive to every being.. from divinity to each tree
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saiom commented on: hor-o-scope by Pungus 5 years 6 days ago
  Happy birthday... 25 years:   Happy birthday... 25 years in this life and millions before this one If you are a scorpio, you are a healer flowing into people and then out, taking their pain and negativity with you.. then cleansing your aura with whatever method works    
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saiom commented on: routine (if only) by Pungus 5 years 6 days ago
response:   You are a spiritual master
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Pungus commented on: Cry Not Over Spilt Milk by saiom 5 years 6 days ago
LOL: Still it's waste from the utters of a dairy cow, a stolen mother, as her baby boys were knifed for profit of the milk she gives. * An ignorant society, struggling to live, moves through the news, the propganda, like dead truths.
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djtj commented on: Yellow Wings by djtj 5 years 1 week ago
Thank you: This is a first draft. I will work on it I am sure.  Thanks for your support!  Deb
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allets commented on: Yellow Wings by djtj 5 years 1 week ago
I Mix Metaphors: Postpoets do it often. I'm a follower. It works here. . Lady A .
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djtj commented on: Tiles in the Moss by djtj 5 years 1 week ago
I wish: I wish that were so but I tend to believe it though.  My answer are always spot on, I just dont like the polka dots i make. Thank you for reading and the insight.
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djtj commented on: Codependence by Jesster 5 years 1 week ago
Yes we do: I love short and to the point poetry.
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djtj commented on: meals and feels by Jesster 5 years 1 week ago
so that is just that: great end line. 
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