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allets commented on: Recycled Wood by allets 4 years 34 weeks* ago* I Also Adore: Old furniture. If restored, beautiful! New wood is not always better for Gaia.:D ~A~ [ go to comment ]
allets commented on: Somalia by allets 4 years 34 weeks* ago* Myopic Vision: . All connected, humans surviving. Indoor farming can feed communities. Cities farm vacant lots. Apartment farm? With inflation about to double, maybe! :D . As eco-systems fail (300,000 +Haitians died in 2010) migration will increase - see Haitians in sail boat rescue off Florida. Dominican Republic built wall and armed guards seal off 1/2 of Hispanola. It begins. ~A~ [ go to comment ]
allets commented on: I Wish by Spangleburt 4 years 34 weeks* ago* Powerful Write: Thought unspoken, almost hiddden. Nice lie cover, reader allowed to know there is a hidden truth. Tell-all irony. Well constructed. . Lady A [ go to comment ]
patriciajj commented on: Welcome To Our Downfall by LittleLennonGurl 4 years 34 weeks* ago* I could easily add my voice: I could easily add my voice to your chorus. I can relate to your concise and to-the-point expression of frustration, although I've been around long enough to know that some people do eventually "get it". The hard way. Others never do, unfortunately. But no one ever said this world was fair. Nice work. [ go to comment ]
patriciajj commented on: Querant by saiom 4 years 34 weeks* ago* Mind-bending. Love it! : Mind-bending. Love it! [ go to comment ]
patriciajj commented on: Air Looms by saiom 4 years 34 weeks* ago* "Air Looms". That's: "Air Looms". That's brilliant! And you're a pro with the rhymes. A pleasure. [ go to comment ]
patriciajj commented on: Somalia by allets 4 years 34 weeks* ago* While our eyes are on: While our eyes are on Ukraine, Somalia's humanitarian crisis and its tidal wave of refugees should not be forgotten. The last three lines of your poem show a great amount of awareness and compassion. Well said! [ go to comment ]
patriciajj commented on: Recycled Wood by allets 4 years 34 weeks* ago* I love your idea to save: I love your idea to save precious trees that provide shade, oxygen, cleaner air, climate contol, privacy, noise barriers, erosion prevention, wildlife habitat, psychological health (Studies show patients in hospital rooms that have a view of trees recovered faster) and, of course, natural beauty. Reclaimed wood is a smart solution. [ go to comment ]
patriciajj commented on: bathwater by Pungus 4 years 34 weeks* ago* You have a gift for pinning: You have a gift for pinning down aspects of the human adventure with metaphors that erupt and stun. Feeling this! Amazing. [ go to comment ]
Starward commented on: Spring Equinox by randyjohnson 4 years 34 weeks* ago* I have never seen the equinox: I have never seen the equinox event celebrated in just this way before----most unique. [ go to comment ]
allets commented on: Justified by lyrycsyntyme 4 years 34 weeks* ago* TP As A Metaphor: . Dig deep or discover by chance, origins with no author. Why Somalia? Warbucks. ~A~ [ go to comment ]
allets commented on: Against the Wall of Generations by lyrycsyntyme 4 years 34 weeks* ago* Delete - Revise Suggested: "Of all'" kills the cliche. clean up line lengths kast verse.' "Still she needs to scream." - more emotionally charged. "you can't protect men and women..." Delete "I think" most if oiem is objective - "I can" subjective (voice and POV change). last line - ? delete count the suffering and servitude, the size of the stones. Most disturbing, each of them is a brick in the wall of generations." - tighter. . I never stop edting. Made changes this am to poems written in 2010. ~A~ [ go to comment ]
allets commented on: Life is Gay by Rashbar 4 years 34 weeks* ago* You Are Interesting: Your story poem has dialogue. Cool. You're onto a fine style. Lady A [ go to comment ]
Starward commented on: Was This, Perhaps, Only The Beginning Of An Epidemic? [April 15th, 1912] by Starward-Led 4 years 34 weeks* ago* I would have to refer you to: I would have to refer you to the text of the novel itself---well worthy acquiring a copy. [ go to comment ]
Spinoza commented on: Welcome To Our Downfall by LittleLennonGurl 4 years 34 weeks* ago* The stranglehold of the elite: Prince Andrew – the 62 year old son of the Queen, is a prime example. He’s a natural-born cunt, that constantly twittles around with little kids and uses them as sex toys. But he never sees a moment of jail time. He just pays twelve-million pound (16 million US Dollars) settlements out of court, and all is forgiven. But he doesn’t even pay it out of his own pocket. It’s paid by the UK tax payers. Because the UK law is setup in such a way, that it pays all legal settlements for royalty. And this goes on across the entirety of Europe… https://isgp-studies.com/belgian-x-dossiers-of-the-marc-dutroux-affair-the-accused [ go to comment ]