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lyrycsyntyme commented on: Crash by lyrycsyntyme 4 years 28 weeks ago
According to at least 1: According to at least 1 study, 20 billion would get all homeless people off of the street and into shelter of their own. Dying empires always find money for war. They generally die from the inside out, rather than the reverse.   Thank you, as always, for both your insight and your support.
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lyrycsyntyme commented on: Crash by lyrycsyntyme 4 years 28 weeks ago
Thank you Patricia: If we do not self examine, eventually mirrors still chase us down and surround us, even if in the form of scattering broken glass.
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patriciajj commented on: I Did It Perfectly by allets 4 years 28 weeks ago
I wish I could look back on: I wish I could look back on my many years and call it "wondrous living". (Love that definition!) A well-crafted view of your grand adventure. 
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lyrycsyntyme commented on: Vista County jail by ray_strickland 4 years 28 weeks ago
A heavy, verbal walk: ..in your shoes is offered in your raw, emotive, visual penning that plays out as several acts in a play. Walk accepted by this person, though this write, I know, just a few steps in your journey through consequence, to deserved rebirth, and - I hope - a real opportunity to build a future. Forgiveness is not something our society believes in as much as it should. I pray that your writing will keep you strong through the struggle. All the best.
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patriciajj commented on: Higher Frequency Light by saiom 4 years 28 weeks ago
The power of simplicity: the: The power of simplicity: the direct path to a higher plane of truth. I love it!  A sublime and inspired metaphor.
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patriciajj commented on: Crash by lyrycsyntyme 4 years 28 weeks ago
Eventually we have to look at: Eventually we have to look at the aftermath of society's failures and dysfunction. You sketched it so well: not one word wasted and every word crucial and every sharp line plummeting to the natural conclusion of disappointments and rage. Stark reality, brilliantly penned. 
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lyrycsyntyme commented on: shift by ray_strickland 4 years 28 weeks ago
Every line of this poem of yours: ..is rich for the imaginative senses. My favorite line being "The slight shift in the placement of the stars".
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lyrycsyntyme commented on: Barefoot by saiom 4 years 28 weeks ago
haha: That's also pretty much how some indiginous North Americans and colonizing Europeans kept pumpkin and squash seedlings protected from late frosts. They'd plant the seed and surround it with horse or bison manure.
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Starward commented on: Dear Pain by allets 4 years 28 weeks ago
This is both a very beautiful: This is both a very beautiful poem, and a very instructive meditation.
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allets commented on: Crash by lyrycsyntyme 4 years 28 weeks ago
Prayers Unmet: Crash - when the plate is empty. When the body fails or a supply line burps. Businesss will crash unable to afford money. 1 million evictions estimated here annually - no data base, no usa dept to track and help the safetynetters. 33 billion for Urlkraine - I have the great pure and healthy-water crisis going on here. 33 whole billion with usa economy stretched supporting the global elite. What will usa and russkie olgarques do when assets yatchs sold and virtual currency stashes confiscated to go to free Ukraine? Back an oligarch into a poverty corner and they just might nuke em. All or nothing - thug wars. congress and senate need to teach Joey how to think like a crminal. 33 billion???!!!!!! . ~A~ . I applaud the theme of this write. Unanswered behests become failed wings. Crashes that result will be giantine. .   .  
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lyrycsyntyme commented on: Dear Pain by allets 4 years 28 weeks ago
haha. Hey, what ever works,: haha. Hey, what ever works, why ever it works. Maybe it's pyschological refocus, or a reminder that drives motivation to push through. Attitude in approach, as you're saying ; )   You're welcome for the well wishes, enjoy the weather : )
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allets commented on: Dear Pain by allets 4 years 28 weeks ago
Weather Dried Out: 50's-60'a due but older means you creak. Thank you for the well wish. I am not superstitious and magic is not here either, but when I wear my ankh, I feel really fine, a taliswoman :D. . Pain is about attitude, you face it square and live, or succumb to it and stop living. . ~A~  
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allets commented on: REELS OF NOCTURNAL THOUGHT by georgeschaefer 4 years 28 weeks ago
Lyrical Write: The poet in nature. ~A~ 
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allets commented on: RECLAIM THE LEAD by georgeschaefer 4 years 28 weeks ago
Good advice: For any endeavor! ~A~. 
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lyrycsyntyme commented on: Dear Pain by allets 4 years 28 weeks ago
Great write: The idea of a talisman longing to be restored to it's existence at 'birth' is a brilliant portrayal.   We move through this life like some lovechild of a talisman and a pulsar, "luck" - or euphoria and pain - flickering on and off. At some point or points, both pulsating at once.   I hope you're feeling better today.
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