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Starward commented on: Why We Love Dogs (A Little Something in Celebration of National Dog Day) by patriciajj 3 years 26 weeks ago
Although this is one of the: Although this is one of the shortest poems that I have read from Patricia, it is just as full of her signature style---which, were I too sum it up (with my present understanding of it), is to find the spiritual meaning in natural phenomenon.  The Gates of Orion and Councils of Stars provide her a venue for this; and now, she brings her particularly poetic insight to the subject of Beloved Pets.    She defines what the joy of a pet is, and how we understand, by instinct long possessed among our species, that our pet canines see beyond our skin, and the circumstances of our situations (by which we too often judge or criticize our fellow human beings; something a domestic dog will not do).  And the dog's wild heart not only tames us, but becomes fiercely protective of us, and wildly glad to greet us when we return after an absence.     In February, 1972, I was given a Cocker Spaniel pup that I named Monica.  She lived until May, 1986.  The bond between us was deep, unshakeable, and---to me---comforting.  Unlike my parents, she did not castigate me for my failing.  Unlike my classmates, she did not make jest of me for my appearance, or for whom my nature was inclined to love.  When I was in a good mood, she liked to romp around, chase a ball, stuff like that.  But when I was sad, or frustrated (two almost constant aspects of my adolescence), she discerned that almost immediately and would not leave my side, not even to chase a ball or collect a doggy treat.  Her wild heart tamed my clumsy and awkward rages, or my sad realization that (until 1976) whomever I loved, or had a crush on, would be unresponsive or even dismissive.  Monica, even in her extreme old age, was never unresponsive or dismissive.  When she passed, I wept uncontrolably for days.  I never thought I would see her like again (and I have most always dwelt with dogs) until a rescued chihuahua pup, whom we named Zoey, entered my life in 2010.  Zoey has the same discernment Monica had; much the same personality; and is able to discern when I am seriously ill, even before I realize that.  (She also could see the ghost that supposedly haunted the second residence we shared with Zoey, although that is another story.     I have said all that to say this.  I admire this poem of Patricia's very much, as much of her more cosmic poems, and for the same reason:  she is the classical kind of Poet, like the Alexandrian Poets or their successors, the Roman Neoterics, who explained things poetically.  The Cosmos uses these highly literate interpreters to explain itself to us, and thus, through us, explain itself to itself.  And when one of our planet's fur-heroes, with eyes of discernment that see past circumstances into our souls, wins our hearts and, in its way, offers us its own Love, the Cosmos finds a fulfillment.  Massive, distamt stars fuse hdrogen into light and warmth, but to us, and to our pets, is given the privilege and responsibility to love; and, thus loving, to bring the Cosmos a little nearer to its ultimate destiny.  And in declaring---explaining---reminding us of this, Patricia participates in guiding the Cosmos to its ultimate destiny and understanding.     This is a magnificent poem, and a worthy addition to Patricia's collection.
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patriciajj commented on: Musings On Time II by rachel 3 years 26 weeks ago
"Time is an illusion, but it’s: "Time is an illusion, but it’s made out of real things.   Kind of like yourself."   A stellar way to wrap up your cleverly casual and relatable expression.    
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crypticbard commented on: Chatterton's redress by redbrick 3 years 26 weeks ago
Thank you most kindly dear: Thank you most kindly dear Patricia. May the beauty you find be the blessing that surrounds.
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Starward commented on: with you by redbrick 3 years 26 weeks ago
I love poems about Autumn;: I love poems about Autumn; and this strikes me as just such a poem.  Tremendous emotion resonates from a few sparse lines.  Concision and compression, which this poem adroitly demonstrates, are signs of classic talent---as the great Poet, J. V. Cunningham asserted, decades ago.
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crypticbard commented on: WINTER by chris 3 years 26 weeks ago
A very understandable state: A very understandable state to be in. If memory serves, the term is seasonal affect disorder. Although I wonder why is should a disorder when it is more of a syndrome. Perhaps sad is better than sas. lol. Thanks for sharing.
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RudyPoetryColle... commented on: Walls Closing In by RudyPoetryColle... 3 years 26 weeks ago
Thank you very much! : Thank you very much! 
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crypticbard commented on: Walls Closing In by RudyPoetryColle... 3 years 26 weeks ago
The image of an overly moist: The image of an overly moist and drowning cut diamond - what a brilliant thing to behold!
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patriciajj commented on: Chatterton's redress by redbrick 3 years 26 weeks ago
Brilliant use of contrast in: Brilliant use of contrast in this dramatic and picturesque tribute that activates the sense of taste in a highly symbolic way.   As always, your poetic craftsmanship stops me in my tracks and seizes me with amazement. What literary experience is better than that? Everything you conjure is phenomenal. I mean that.  
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patriciajj commented on: Hid my love in a poem by uglyalek 3 years 26 weeks ago
Simply wondrous. I echo what: Simply wondrous. I echo what Starward wrote; it certainly is profound emotion contained in a succinct, beautiful package. Each line is the definition of elegant yet pulsating brevity, then sewn together loosely with the crafty use of white space it becomes . . . a marvel.   The last line rings true with such power and perfection that I don't know what else to say.  
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patriciajj commented on: Mushrooms in the forest by Pungus 3 years 26 weeks ago
"veil of absolute gloom: "veil of absolute gloom spritzed into the wind, or with pondering paintbrush perhaps fixed by the trembling hand of omnipotent genius."   And what luxurious, atmospheric, mind-blowing strokes of genius your poetic brush has brought before us!   I need to burrow deep into each explosive line to grasp, then emerge, with the actual experience, which I interpret as surreal, menacing and hallucinatory. It could also be dazzling symbolism for an oppressive force or fear, but whatever the translation, it is absolutely worth the mental workout.   Such art! I'm still breathless.  
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crypticbard commented on: This is a poem by uglyalek 3 years 26 weeks ago
Somewhat likened to the: Somewhat likened to the tribute to the best song ever written. Could it that both writer and reader create the composition together and this symbiosis is what makes literature what it is? Like from two opposing banks the selfsame river flows. And yet the water in it is always different but in some ways the same.
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crypticbard commented on: Miracles by uglyalek 3 years 26 weeks ago
The completion of this will: The completion of this will sit steadily on her and what she does or does not, it would appear. She walks away for 'ere heart's dearth...  
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Pungus commented on: Waiting wishing wondering by Pungus 3 years 26 weeks ago
Thank you!!!: Your diction is mighty magnetic
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crypticbard commented on: Waiting wishing wondering by Pungus 3 years 26 weeks ago
"Waiting, wishing, wondering": "Waiting, wishing, wondering" such a powerful rift to riff off; the distinct absence of the called for commas bring a whole feel of meaning that otherwise grammatical/syntactical convention would smother. And the penchant for us humans to pin our existence to the behest of others is unfailing in every period of history. A truly gripping expression.
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crypticbard commented on: NUKING HIROSHIMA by georgeschaefer 3 years 26 weeks ago
There is a prophecy and: There is a prophecy and promise that anyone that lives by the sword ⚔️ dies by the sword ⚔️ Hence peoples and nations that live by war shall by that *virtue* be decimated by war; which seems to be true of the ancient warring empires. It's kind of like the Bermuda Triangle of gratuitous violence. Just a thought really. 
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