With like a sneer of built-up resentment,
She said we're gonna need to take a break,
And separate for as long as fate decides,
To reignite our fairytale once-upon-a-times,
Those which she has apparantly memorized
And is mesemrized by.
Waiting wishing wondering...
I kick about and cry my stupid eyes out
Beneath these stinking fucking bedsheets.
I am being eaten alive, bone by bone,
But I refuse to abandon hope---Ohhh!!!
I don't care if it takes me to the grave
Waiting wishing wondering...
This is the end of my life’s little lullaby.
The pistol is strong and heavy in my hand.
I am sorry to those who care, goodbye.
"Waiting, wishing, wondering"
"Waiting, wishing, wondering" such a powerful rift to riff off; the distinct absence of the called for commas bring a whole feel of meaning that otherwise grammatical/syntactical convention would smother. And the penchant for us humans to pin our existence to the behest of others is unfailing in every period of history. A truly gripping expression.
here is poetry that doesn't always conform
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Your diction is mighty magnetic
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