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crypticbard commented on: Resuscitated from savasana by Pungus 3 years 20 weeks ago
A bleating brain would cause: A bleating brain would cause a reading on any machine, hence a signification that its brain is not deceased. And that arhythmic rage... something fiersome to behold.
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crypticbard commented on: I promise to find my cave by Pungus 3 years 20 weeks ago
It would seem that we all: It would seem that we all have personal religions that nobody dares recognize! For some it takes off and what a scary thing they have been to behold and even at some point experience. Rabbit holes are coming into view...so enticing.
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crypticbard commented on: It’s time we met by Teytonon 3 years 20 weeks ago
New beginnings! That is: New beginnings! That is always a fresh start to look forward to! And of forgiveness, which is always a groundbreaking prelude to the fresh and new. The lumber gathered pulls the reader's thoughts to the gathering and stacking of firewood for the coming winter. It may be written for something else but the autumnal season  has brought that influence in the way the mind goes. Lovely thought too, that anticipated time of celebration. It will be well worth the wait. Thanks for sharing!
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crypticbard commented on: looking for a real bargain by redbrick 3 years 20 weeks ago
Thanks Patricia. It is always: Thanks Patricia. It is always a privilege to hear your esteemed review and estimation of what has been offered here before our august collaborative venue for online poetry. Your encouragement is truly invaluable at developing and growing fertile fields for thought and expression and the sharing thereof!
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patriciajj commented on: looking for a real bargain by redbrick 3 years 20 weeks ago
I'm always stunned, in the: I'm always stunned, in the best way, by the innovation, the razor-sharpness, of your wordplay. It's poetic gymnastics worthy of a gold medal. Applause! 
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Starward commented on: Counting Boxcars by Spinoza 3 years 20 weeks ago
I am becoming quite impressed: I am becoming quite impressed by the metaphorical meanings you draw from railroad equipment.
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Spinoza commented on: @ 27.225 MHz: WallStones; Afterglow by S74rw4rd-13d 3 years 20 weeks ago
we are what we are:     crazes that become stylish, then fashionable, and--- finally---normative … abetted and enabled by towering technology founded on the lowest motives and moralities     That alone, tells us, what sort of egregious gorillas we are at heart.   And the seething wreath of flame, in the rear-view mirror – is our own profound ignorance… on a multi-stage burn, propelling us on the very same projectory.   No doubt, we’d be a menace, wherever we hovered.     ~/~        
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crypticbard commented on: Civil Behavior by S74rw4rd-13d 3 years 20 weeks ago
Those were the classics!: Not to be forgotten! Those were the classics!
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Spinoza commented on: Civil Behavior by S74rw4rd-13d 3 years 20 weeks ago
and don't forget the Ford that stole the show:   Onslow’s Cortina that fired-off like a cannon – such good fun.
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crypticbard commented on: SESAME STREET by chris 3 years 20 weeks ago
Most of us have most probably: Most of us have most probably been weened off through this program. At least those of us born after the war
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crypticbard commented on: Counting Boxcars by Spinoza 3 years 20 weeks ago
Oh the fun... without sheep: Oh the fun... without sheep count boxcars! I was half expecting a riling morality narrative from the famed Boxcar Kids type novels. 12 or a 112 at midnight!  Good choice for posting. And quite honoured at such graciousness. A success in putting together a railroad element with many other elements and themes so they interplayed intuitively.
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crypticbard commented on: Shivering Happiness by Spinoza 3 years 20 weeks ago
Why thanks! Off to read it: Why thanks! Off to read it now. Cheers!
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Spinoza commented on: Shivering Happiness by Spinoza 3 years 20 weeks ago
one for you: Well, I posted one... just for you. Counting Boxcars.
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crypticbard commented on: Family of cockroaches by Pungus 3 years 20 weeks ago
Minus that family of roaches: Minus that family of roaches in the hair, shivers! But true, the success of a poem before 10P.M. is indeed a good thing!
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crypticbard commented on: It is better I keep myself locked in a box by Pungus 3 years 20 weeks ago
A box with a keyhole, like: A box with a keyhole, like that top drawer in Peter Pan will allow the eye without lids to see through just as Tinker Bell did, spying on Wendy. Oh but the sound of one speaking will reverb within the walls of said box. mmm...
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