Excellent simile! And the poem creates an effect that, even after it has been read, the lights are still dancing, still chasing each other, independent of the reader. And I totally agree with Patricia's comment as well!!!
Dear Starward, it is particularly gratifying to learn that these chasing and dancing lights continue independently after reading. Thanks you most kindly.
Dazzling wordplay that leaves a lasting imprint on the heart and the mind. Few poets can fill the page with so much imagery using just a few lines. Stunned again, great poet!
My gratitude for these kind words. And a very encouraging note that a lasting imprint is to be had in both mind and heart, then from that we can assume the writing ✍️ has been a success. Many thanks
Excellent simile! And the
Excellent simile! And the poem creates an effect that, even after it has been read, the lights are still dancing, still chasing each other, independent of the reader. And I totally agree with Patricia's comment as well!!!
Starward
Dear Starward, it is
Dear Starward, it is particularly gratifying to learn that these chasing and dancing lights continue independently after reading. Thanks you most kindly.
here is poetry that doesn't always conform
galateus, arkayye, arqios,arquious, crypticbard, excalibard, wordweaver
Dazzling wordplay that leaves
Dazzling wordplay that leaves a lasting imprint on the heart and the mind. Few poets can fill the page with so much imagery using just a few lines. Stunned again, great poet!
My gratitude for these kind
My gratitude for these kind words. And a very encouraging note that a lasting imprint is to be had in both mind and heart, then from that we can assume the writing ✍️ has been a success. Many thanks
here is poetry that doesn't always conform
galateus, arkayye, arqios,arquious, crypticbard, excalibard, wordweaver