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If a poet's calling is to: If a poet's calling is to give a voice to the ungraspable, you excelled in your purpose. Waves of majesty, wonder and heartfelt praise thunder through each line.    Magnificent! 

Your work, as always, is a: Your work, as always, is a drill into the hollows of the soul. Where echoes are begged to speak within, till they pound down the walls of separation and isolation which encase emptiness.  I truly hope that these efforts lead you to solace.

Thank you for the reply.  I: Thank you for the reply.  I concede that I may have misunderstood your intention.  Perhaps my original comment should be removed.

I applaud, and agree with,: I applaud, and agree with, your assertion that this dire problem needs to be addressed---loudly and relentlessly---because it happens too much and too often (well, even one incident is one too much).  But, although I agree with you on the dire seriousness of it, I think the attempt to "rewrite" one of the holiest hymns of one of the year's two Holiest seasons, is a disrespectful toward the hymn and the season.  Just my opinion, and I do applaud bringing this horrible social problem to the fore of your readers attention; that is most commendable.

I look forward to the: I look forward to the emergence of that series.

This is truly beautiful and: This is truly beautiful and engrossing. But my favorite verse is the sixth one:   "rivers flow      through the night herding the storm      to far away"   While I don't live by a river, it reminds me a lot of the creek near my cabin, rushing along after a thaw or rain. Sometimes it sounds like a small waterfall, as the the water races downhill, heading into a river and then out into a lake somewhere hours away. Spectacular, the way that you put the visual.

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