Lovely and sad. Poignant!: Lovely and sad. Poignant! Lovely imagery with a punctuating sadness relieved by the warth of memories. Lovely write! Cheers ss
Such a hauntingly rueful and: Such a hauntingly rueful and searching poem, I like the time analogy and how it wraps up in the end,
With more than one meaning
Ie out of time
Or
A timeless couple
Or
A timeless story
Or
A timeless pain that lives again and again
Thanks for sharing some beautifu and soulful l imagery. Cheerss
Revisitng this great poem, I: Revisitng this great poem, I am very disappointed in, and embarrassed by, the comment I posted last October. Yes, the other two poems have written better comments than mine, but what I failed to say is how much I admire how the presence of the missed person is both evokved and summoned by the various natural and local phenomena the Poet names. Part of a Poet's role is to name things: in that respect, Poetry began in Eden. By namin all the things that evoke the presence you miss, and bow they evoke it, you show us not only how to find the same comfort, but you also bear witness to the hope of Heaven, where wehere pain is forgotten and forgiveness is remembered. Wow! I don't think professional theologians could put it more poignantly.
Its so nice to look at things: Its so nice to look at things in a similar way a meeting of minds and windows of souls, cutnfirmnthe same cloth the views may be different but the details are interpreted similarly, not too much that nothing need be said and just enough commonality to not grow tiresome the phrase "you are my person" come to mind. What a lovely invitation! Shame its only for the one! Nicer than nice write!
Wonderful uplifting piece. I: Wonderful uplifting piece. I can feel the enthusiasm and positivity lepaing off the page! Well done, I needed to hear this today, Thankyou!
Beautiful! I felt filled with: Beautiful! I felt filled with the Holy Spirit when. I read this. Beautifully rendered etherial yet completely believable and reachable. Well done!
Sounds very satanic and: Sounds very satanic and uncomfortable. Strong imagery to haunt the mind. Hollywood wands and occult spells casting evil shadows for the depraved. I just wanted out. C ya!