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Teytonon commented on: Unreal estate by Teytonon 2 years 5 weeks ago
I will try : I will try Though the maintenance is so high Depends whether  I can get my finances together  Require just a little more time  
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crypticbard commented on: Unreal estate by Teytonon 2 years 5 weeks ago
Oh there now, I'd raise your: Oh there now, I'd raise your offer by a dollar and suspect that neither of us would dwell there in full ownership but I respect the dream and perhaps a bit of bidding as that is a totally sweet habitation. Now to ponder the possibilities of ever dwelling anywhere close to Central Park.
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crypticbard commented on: A litany of manic adventures by SSmoothie 2 years 5 weeks ago
That is the quintessent: That is the quintessent summation of the poetic process. What a life to live, specially with like folk however different and unique they be.
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crypticbard commented on: WORSE THAN COCK BLOCK by georgeschaefer 2 years 5 weeks ago
Best description ever and: Best description ever and never would have paired that title image with writer's block. The initial thought was, without writing implements the go to would be the note app on the mobile phone. Or if worse come to worst to dictate on the voice recording app. But flowing with the poem, guided by its title, remained within the world of that feeling described. Tremendous metaphor produced here. Good one George.
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Pungus commented on: A litany of manic adventures by SSmoothie 2 years 5 weeks ago
No lie: I am always SUPER stoked when you post
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Pungus commented on: Maintain a focused frequency by Pungus 2 years 5 weeks ago
Bouquet of thanks: I guess it depends on the overall Tolerance levels of those involved
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Starward commented on: A litany of manic adventures by SSmoothie 2 years 5 weeks ago
This is an excellent poem,: This is an excellent poem, and you deploy the metaphor of music quite well.  The center of the poem is in the lines "And plucking joy from the air / A glorious spiritual liturgy / How beautiful now since we've learned to pray . . ."  And the last four lines shows the effect of the process described in the poem's center.  The hopefulness conveyed in this poem is like a cup of cool water in the scorching heat of the desert of our squabbles and despairs in this difficult time.
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SSmoothie commented on: Maintain a focused frequency by Pungus 2 years 5 weeks ago
I like it alot! BUT HIGHLY: I like it alot! BUT HIGHLY UNLIKELY FOR A PARDON ME THINKS.
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SSmoothie commented on: Centralia by life_used_to_be... 2 years 5 weeks ago
Beautiful elegantly rendered: Beautiful elegantly rendered but humble and rather charming. Hugss 
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SSmoothie commented on: WORSE THAN COCK BLOCK by georgeschaefer 2 years 5 weeks ago
How true. .. there's nothing: How true. .. there's nothing worse! Well described i had fun while it lasted and went home empty handed 
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crypticbard commented on: Hypersensitive by Pungus 2 years 5 weeks ago
Oh cool, yeah. Got that.: Oh cool, yeah. Got that.
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Pungus commented on: Hypersensitive by Pungus 2 years 5 weeks ago
Withdrawals I wish: Nah, what I'm saying is I'm in the habit of only eating one meal every 30-40 hours but puff on cigs like a draconic druglord
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crypticbard commented on: murder at the kaisarion by redbrick 2 years 5 weeks ago
There is comfort that it is: There is comfort that it is deemed so by an esteemed reader. Thoughts are less that half a penny cheap, even to the most intimate of relations. Thank you for indicating so.
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crypticbard commented on: Plastic dolls are sexy by Pungus 2 years 5 weeks ago
Oh wow, intense scenario.: Oh wow, intense scenario. Curious too because of language the old British classic films mix in with the samurai celluloid masterpieces. That is totally the reader's conceiving.
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crypticbard commented on: Hypersensitive by Pungus 2 years 5 weeks ago
withdrawals?: withdrawals?
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