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Bless You Starward! : Much Gratitude for your kindness:)

I see the correction, and I: I see the correction, and I say again:  excellent poem!

This is good, and I agree,: This is good, and I agree, but I would suggest an adjustment to the eighth line.  The pronoun, "he," doubles back to the nearest proper noun, which is Fetterman; with the implication (which stumbled me at first) that Fetterman would accuse the Democrats, his own party, of cheating.  If Fetterman wins, and an accusation of cheating is raised, it will be Oz or Trump (who is really the Wizard of Oz, in this case, as the man behind the screen pulling the control levers) who will raise that accusation.  Just replace "he'll" with "Oz'll" and the line will read more accurately and smoothy.   Otherwise, this is an excellent political poem.

thank you for the kind words: thank you for the kind words

Each person has their own: Each person has their own point of view.  You should be expressing yourself in your poetry.  Pundits and scholars be damned, first person narrative can really drive home that point.

It would seem that an once of: It would seem that an once of care is almost always worth several pounds of cure. Prevention of disaster allows room for more fun!

Thanks most kindly, dear: Thanks most kindly, dear Patricia. If lines could still be made to dance and come ablaze then there is still some writing left to be done.