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SSmoothie commented on: the way you tell by Spinoza 1 year 34 weeks ago
Softly, softly catchy: Softly, softly catchy monkey... I felt hypnotised by the firelight, eyes heavy and feeling happy, warm and content,  nice write! 
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SSmoothie commented on: My Beautiful Despot by Spinoza 1 year 34 weeks ago
8ts just that easy to sink: 8ts just that easy to sink with that heavy metal vibe you are what you attract as they say. Well verbalised here. Nice one 
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SSmoothie commented on: Promise Of The Dawn by GailHudson 1 year 34 weeks ago
Wonderful uplifting piece. I: Wonderful uplifting piece. I can feel the enthusiasm and positivity lepaing off the page! Well done, I needed to hear this today, Thankyou! 
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SSmoothie commented on: Forgiveness by LornaRJ 1 year 34 weeks ago
Beautiful! I felt filled with: Beautiful! I felt filled with the Holy Spirit when. I read this. Beautifully rendered etherial yet completely believable and reachable. Well done! 
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SSmoothie commented on: our p.o.t.e.ntial by insightspinner 1 year 34 weeks ago
Epic! Well constructed: Epic! Well constructed elequent and resounding. Thank you for sharing.
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SSmoothie commented on: Serious drivel by Teytonon 1 year 34 weeks ago
What us the one thing? That: What us the one thing? That even blood goes down the drain?  Other than that nice work! Cheers ss 
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Starward commented on: Footnote: Theological Nuance by Seryddwr 1 year 34 weeks ago
Thank you so very much for: Thank you so very much for that comment.  I appreciate your words and the time you took to visit the poem.
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SSmoothie commented on: Maniacal smile by humanfruit 1 year 34 weeks ago
Sounds very satanic and: Sounds very satanic and uncomfortable. Strong imagery to haunt the mind. Hollywood wands and occult spells casting evil shadows for the depraved. I just wanted out. C ya!
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SSmoothie commented on: Transcendence of Fury by patriciajj 1 year 34 weeks ago
Freedom  Captivity  Rage and: Freedom  Captivity  Rage and mercy  So much coiled.into this work  It hirt to read and yet I was compelled to read and re read and soak up the nuances and the explosive opportunities for ideas that float unhampered and unhampered  through the universe. From a proud stallion to the pain of humiliation rising to rage  Majestic imagery with clear and relevant POVs.  The same savagery weilded by a machete can easily be matched by the whisper of a few words,  when we harness  what we admire for our own selfish gains it becomes not what it was and thus often despised. You can lead a horse ...but... Flash to the quieting of dives cooing with fall of the veil of death peace freedom rage sloughs off into yesterday to the earth as the freedom pulls us up things the ether  Mercy knows where its at,  Sometimes you have to be on your knees for a different take and  sometimes if not all times death can be merciful. Clearly an intense and affecting masterpiece.  Best blessingss 
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SSmoothie commented on: Transcendence of Fury by patriciajj 1 year 34 weeks ago
Well said! Why am I not: Well said! Why am I not surprised but more than pleasantly delighted  :)
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SSmoothie commented on: One Spark is a Galaxy by patriciajj 1 year 34 weeks ago
Wow! I have to go and read: Wow! I have to go and read starwards poem! This is just magnificent and empathy and respect pours from this work.  So powerfully descriptive as only you could lace together with such sensitivity and verracious verbage  And that last stanza - "and, knowing that Love  stitches galaxy to galaxy, and everything, together,   remember who they are."  Just glorious! 
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SSmoothie commented on: Footnote: Theological Nuance by Seryddwr 1 year 34 weeks ago
Its pretty gruesome what the: Its pretty gruesome what the sacrifice was to save humanity beyond the 3rd dimension, but oh how generous! It's breathtakingly incredible to think about! Great write! i was twisted up by the irony and caught in a mirror wall reflecting endless possibilities.  
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Starward commented on: Mnemonic Pain by SSmoothie 1 year 34 weeks ago
Thank you.  That is: Thank you.  That is an AWESOME testimony, and I am taking comfort from it in my own difficulties, even as I write these words.  This poem, and your comments upon it, are going to be of great help, going forward, to readers who come upon them, as I have been helped this very day.
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Starward commented on: Words For My Lady's Lasting Shoelessness by Seryddwr 1 year 34 weeks ago
I am so sorry for failing to: I am so sorry for failing to respond to this comment in a timely manner:  please forgive me.
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SSmoothie commented on: Mnemonic Pain by SSmoothie 1 year 34 weeks ago
And so it is my friend if I: And so it is my friend if I didn't have Yeshua Christ and God to deliver me, and trust me this was a complete blessing and deliverance  during uncertain times, it happened at work and I only lost 1/4% of my income, I needed a break. Every time something big happens I get time to step back and breathe and learn something will be okay without me and others not. Its the balance between the two that we need to find. I was fearless in my conviction and God delivered me from an evil I was not willing to partake in it broke my heart to watch and then I didn't have to watch it any more, when 8 returned it had ended and I am building my strength to endure and sometimes functionality  everyday.  Thank you for you lovely comments friend. Happy lent, Best blessings to you and so it is.  
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