Wonderful uplifting piece. I: Wonderful uplifting piece. I can feel the enthusiasm and positivity lepaing off the page! Well done, I needed to hear this today, Thankyou!
Beautiful! I felt filled with: Beautiful! I felt filled with the Holy Spirit when. I read this. Beautifully rendered etherial yet completely believable and reachable. Well done!
Sounds very satanic and: Sounds very satanic and uncomfortable. Strong imagery to haunt the mind. Hollywood wands and occult spells casting evil shadows for the depraved. I just wanted out. C ya!
Freedom
Captivity
Rage and: Freedom
Captivity
Rage and mercy
So much coiled.into this work
It hirt to read and yet I was compelled to read and re read and soak up the nuances and the explosive opportunities for ideas that float unhampered and unhampered through the universe. From a proud stallion to the pain of humiliation rising to rage
Majestic imagery with clear and relevant POVs.
The same savagery weilded by a machete can easily be matched by the whisper of a few words, when we harness what we admire for our own selfish gains it becomes not what it was and thus often despised. You can lead a horse ...but...
Flash to the quieting of dives cooing with fall of the veil of death peace freedom rage sloughs off into yesterday to the earth as the freedom pulls us up things the ether
Mercy knows where its at,
Sometimes you have to be on your knees for a different take and sometimes if not all times death can be merciful. Clearly an intense and affecting masterpiece.
Best blessingss
Wow! I have to go and read: Wow! I have to go and read starwards poem! This is just magnificent and empathy and respect pours from this work. So powerfully descriptive as only you could lace together with such sensitivity and verracious verbage
And that last stanza -
"and, knowing that Love
stitches galaxy to galaxy,
and everything,
together,
remember who they are."
Just glorious!
Its pretty gruesome what the: Its pretty gruesome what the sacrifice was to save humanity beyond the 3rd dimension, but oh how generous! It's breathtakingly incredible to think about!
Great write! i was twisted up by the irony and caught in a mirror wall reflecting endless possibilities.
Thank you. That is: Thank you. That is an AWESOME testimony, and I am taking comfort from it in my own difficulties, even as I write these words. This poem, and your comments upon it, are going to be of great help, going forward, to readers who come upon them, as I have been helped this very day.
And so it is my friend if I: And so it is my friend if I didn't have Yeshua Christ and God to deliver me, and trust me this was a complete blessing and deliverance during uncertain times, it happened at work and I only lost 1/4% of my income, I needed a break. Every time something big happens I get time to step back and breathe and learn something will be okay without me and others not. Its the balance between the two that we need to find. I was fearless in my conviction and God delivered me from an evil I was not willing to partake in it broke my heart to watch and then I didn't have to watch it any more, when 8 returned it had ended and I am building my strength to endure and sometimes functionality everyday. Thank you for you lovely comments friend. Happy lent, Best blessings to you and so it is.