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patriciajj commented on: Amusing Childhood Memory by J-C4113D 1 year 30 weeks ago
From a heartbreaking and: From a heartbreaking and traumatic childhood, you sifted through what most people would moan about and struck gold. A humorous, touching and teachable moment, skillfully penned. Applauding your ability to see the light in the darkness, the gift in the pain.    
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sweetwater commented on: Footnote: On A Dismal Day by J-C4113D 1 year 30 weeks ago
This really pulled at my: This really pulled at my heart, I also lost my Cocker Spaniel, and still grieve for him. So few words that cover so much heartbreak. sue.
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Teytonon commented on: CORNY ELEVATOR PUNS by chris 1 year 30 weeks ago
‘Elevator’ is a misleading word to use.: 'Elevator' is a misleading word to use. Of course it 'elevates' if you're going up, but you're not elevated if you're going down. (Let me clarify, I'm not referring to anything sexual here). Anyway, I feel we should have a new term for it. I've given it some thought and come up with 'up and down box'. What do you think?
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sweetwater commented on: Stepping Stones by Wordman 1 year 30 weeks ago
Where do you find such: Where do you find such beautiful words, I wish I had your ability to write like that. This poem is stunning. Sue.
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sweetwater commented on: Begin Again by Wordman 1 year 30 weeks ago
Gosh! I love the warmth and: Gosh! I love the warmth and softness of your words throughout this lovely poem. Sue.
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ramonathompsont commented on: Running away by Seeker 1 year 30 weeks ago
I liked this alot. takes: I liked this alot. takes courage to seek new things and new paths in life. yet the familar also holds its own allure. which to choose? sometimes not so easy to know
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sonnysblueridge commented on: Some Things Beyond Dimension by patriciajj 1 year 30 weeks ago
The Blossoming of Spring: And the renewal it brings. You captured this well! I am excited to hear more.  
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sonnysblueridge commented on: Futon by Seeker 1 year 30 weeks ago
Wonderful imagery: I like the flow of the story and how it transitions from the materials of the futon to the threads of the lost love. 
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Teytonon commented on: Greed Was Your Downfall by randyjohnson 1 year 30 weeks ago
This poem can serve as a lesson to us all.: This poem can serve as a lesson to us all. Losing $70,000 gambling seems unimaginable to me. Would you know what he was playing? Was it blackjack or craps? If it was the roulette wheel, I understand what happened. When will people learn? They should NEVER bet on red! Take it from Wesley Snipes...ALWAYS BET ON BLACK!!
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Starward commented on: @ 27.225 MHz: Metaphysics Are Not For Everyone by J-C4113D 1 year 30 weeks ago
Thank you so much for that: Thank you so much for that validation.  Coming from you, that means a lot to me.
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patriciajj commented on: °°°○○○°°° by SSmoothie 1 year 30 weeks ago
I love where you went with: I love where you went with this!   The first draft was enthrallingly beautiful, but after a bit of polishing, some white space and sonorous pacing to provide breathing room for your little bursts of brilliance, or "pixels of light" as you superbly called them, and an engaging cadence to carry your perceptions to a striking conclusion, I can only say: amazing!   Never doubt your innate gift and your extraordinary value here.     I'm deeply moved and humbled by your very supportive words. Brightest blessings.  
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Teytonon commented on: AUTOPSY OF THE NIGHT. by MargoT 1 year 30 weeks ago
If you have a serious interest..: If you have a serious interest in autopsies, send me a private message. I'm a member of The Autopsy Club, a club for those of us who feel anybody can perform an autopsy, not just those with medical training. Our next meeting is Friday, we'd love it if you can attend. It's open Mike night! 
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Teytonon commented on: Scared of the Dark by starlite 1 year 31 weeks ago
I wanted to tell you : I wanted to tell you I'll make it clear  You can overcome your fear  My lovely wife, when we first met Was as scared of the dark as you can get Then she saw me naked She no longer has that fright  The only problem is Now she's scared of the light!
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crypticbard commented on: @ 27.225 MHz: Metaphysics Are Not For Everyone by J-C4113D 1 year 31 weeks ago
Therein lay the power and the: Therein lay the power and the reach of faith in each individual!
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crypticbard commented on: Footnote: Christ's Sunlight by J-C4113D 1 year 31 weeks ago
There is a possible image: There is a possible image there of smoke rising, of incense rising, of the sacrifice of praise that rises as a sweet smelling savour and as the sunlight strikes through the tendrils the worship is received and communion is completed.
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