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Teytonon commented on: I hate Trannies (Abominations to the Lord) by EventHorizon 1 year 9 weeks ago
Gee, you have a lot of hate..: Gee, you have a lot of hate. Hope that writing this makes you feel better. Thanks for posting.
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crypticbard commented on: truest frame by arqios 1 year 9 weeks ago
Sometimes one wonders if it: Sometimes one wonders if it is a kind of verbal starvation or articulative constraint. But either way, it makes for good exercise in literary expression. Wordweaving is a lifelong process of experimentation and learning. Thank you so much patriciajj, for your most welcome visit and review.
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crypticbard commented on: summer fête by arqios 1 year 9 weeks ago
Thanks kindly, patriciajj.: Thanks kindly, patriciajj. It's always a good thing to hear how the poems read. Your welcome words are much appreciated.
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osiriss- commented on: when i say i’m sorry by ewbonitz 1 year 9 weeks ago
It helps to hear: Thank you
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lyrycsyntyme commented on: Coffee, Black by catherine 1 year 9 weeks ago
The opening line sets up the: The opening line sets up the poem so well. What follows seems to say so much about the author of this poem - at least as much as it does in tribute to the muse.
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Pungus commented on: God fondly is doing his job by humanfruit 1 year 9 weeks ago
why thank you: why thank you
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ramonathompsont commented on: God fondly is doing his job by humanfruit 1 year 9 weeks ago
cool write. : cool write. 
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patriciajj commented on: summer fête by arqios 1 year 9 weeks ago
Those first two stanzas,: Those first two stanzas, blossoming with lush metaphors within a superlative simile, were the perfect launching place into a highly evocative reverie.   You realize that small details have explosive power and that zooming in on the right ones ignite the imagination and take us places far beyond what unnecessary disclosure could take us. Brilliantly subtle with intense emotion crackling throughout.   Still lost in its perfection! 
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patriciajj commented on: truest frame by arqios 1 year 9 weeks ago
Another bite-sized: Another bite-sized masterpiece. The way you can successfully merge simplicity and sumptuous wordplay is astounding because it's deceptively difficult to be simple while there are so many pitfalls in being opulent.   This is a sweetly lyrical and profound creation that captures the passage of time in all its inner spectacle, and this line, in particular, left me wonderstruck:   "only truest gold remained"   I'm definitely a fan of your deft wordweaving.    
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Teytonon commented on: Memory’s fine, do something by Teytonon 1 year 9 weeks ago
You sound like Homer Simpson..: You sound like Homer Simpson.. Mmm.. Crunchy!  Haha. 
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lyrycsyntyme commented on: Memory’s fine, do something by Teytonon 1 year 9 weeks ago
Mmm: I always love a crunchy snack...like falafel.
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fo0l4u commented on: Home Again by fo0l4u 1 year 10 weeks ago
I like that. : I like that. 
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patriciajj commented on: Whooo by humanfruit 1 year 10 weeks ago
Your prose is so fun, trippy: Your prose is so fun, trippy and effortlessly brilliant that I always go back for a second read.   An artfully casual indulgence.
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patriciajj commented on: Garden at Night by TheShadowKnows 1 year 10 weeks ago
You set the stage with: You set the stage with enchanting and enticingly dark imagery and then expressed piercingly raw pain with amazing prowess—stunts of language such as:   "A dream Cut away to protect the rest from annihilation"   And the final stunner:   "I taunt the sky and dare it to destroy me"   An immersive achievement. Loved every moment of it!  
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DaveBrowder commented on: Dreaming Into The Stars by DaveBrowder 1 year 10 weeks ago
Thank you!!: Thank you!!
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