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S74rw4rd commented on: Marathon man by Teytonon 48 weeks 4 hours ago
With the utmost respect, I: With the utmost respect, I think this poem could be interpreted as overtly racist.  I have read many of your poems, although I do not comment, and I usually comprehend your sense of humor; but this poem crosses lines that just don't need to be crossed on a site like PostPoems.  This is not criticism of you, personally; I have neither that right nor privilege.
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S74rw4rd commented on: Oceans Apart - 1999 by amberkaye 48 weeks 1 day ago
What was the paper about?: What was the paper about?
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amberkaye commented on: Oceans Apart - 1999 by amberkaye 48 weeks 1 day ago
I had the most amazing thing: I had the most amazing thing happen today, and I feel like sharing it with you.   I finished a paper I'd been struggling to write for school for the past few weeks. The stress of it had me contemplating giving up on my dreams again. I'd dropped out of college in 2006, 3 courses shy of a diploma in a program that wasn't in line with those dreams but would have still been useful. I'd only been in that program because I'd lost the scholarship I was using for my dreams, but I still qualified for programs at a different school.
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georgeschaefer commented on: THANKFUL FOR THE CHILDREN by joy 48 weeks 1 day ago
too man of us forget about: too man of us forget about the children but they can be a wonder.
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amberkaye commented on: Oceans Apart - 1999 by amberkaye 48 weeks 1 day ago
I was once told I have the: I was once told I have the patience of a Saint
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S74rw4rd commented on: Oceans Apart - 1999 by amberkaye 48 weeks 2 days ago
The great Poet, J. V.: The great Poet, J. V. Cunningham, once described having to sneak up on a poem as if it were a watch dog to whom you offer a juicy steak as a bribe.  Perhaps you should consider an opposite strategy:  let the Cosmos sneak up on you and deliver a poem to your doorstep when the time is right.  But keep looking for it; your enthusiastic patience will make the process go faster.
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amberkaye commented on: Oceans Apart - 1999 by amberkaye 48 weeks 2 days ago
No trespass at all, I welcome: No trespass at all, I welcome the feedback.   With everything I have had going on in the last 10 months, I'm not sure I see much writing coming soon. The Cosmos is open to me, definitely, but it seems to require other gifts.
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S74rw4rd commented on: Oceans Apart - 1999 by amberkaye 48 weeks 2 days ago
I hope I am not trespassing: I hope I am not trespassing by offering this comment.  Now seems to be a time of new beginnings; or, a continuation of your original writing, but in a different venue, with a different emphasis.  The whole Cosmos is open before you, and you need only select a subject.  The words may not flow at once because the well (to borrow a metaphor from Mark Twain) may need priming, but it will eventually begin to fill, and then you will be able to draw from it.  I am reminded of a young lady, nineteen years old, who was vacationing with four friends in Geneva, Switzerland.  They had been reading ghost stories for entertainment (no such thing as television back then), and decided to have a ghost story contest, who could write the scariest.  Everyone but the nineteen year old girl started rapidly; she experienced a most frustrating writers block.  Finally, on either the night of, or the night before June 16th, 1816, she had a nightmare that kept her awake the rest of the night and gave her the idea for a short story.  At her boyfriend's urging, she expanded it to a novel, which was published in 1818.  Her name was Mary Shelley, and that first novel of hers, Frankenstein, has never been out of print.
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amberkaye commented on: Oceans Apart - 1999 by amberkaye 48 weeks 2 days ago
I started writing after a: I started writing after a traumatic event that occurred in my Freshman year of high school, which was in 1996. After I was put on anti-depressants and other psych meds in October of 2002, I developed a writer's block that won't go away. The novel I was working on, I can't find the original version of it and whatever I last did to it was a complete and total annihilation. It's depressing to even open the document anymore.
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S74rw4rd commented on: You - 06/17/02 by amberkaye 48 weeks 2 days ago
There are far too many people: There are far too many people like this out and about in the world.  We have to be cautious and wary . . . .
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S74rw4rd commented on: HYSTERICAL by beaconzbard 48 weeks 2 days ago
In 2007, I underwent open: In 2007, I underwent open heart surgery, and my survival chances were three in twenty.  After the surgery and my release from the hospital, I had a follow up appointment with the surgeon, and I thanked him for saving my life.  (I might add, before continuing, that he did not share my Faith.)  He replied that he had done nothing at all.  When I asked him what that meant, he told me that when he opened my chest, the mess that he had found was beyond even what he had been trained for (and he is nationally recognized as an expert on that kind of condition).  I asked him what he did, and he told me---and I say this in all truth---"I picked up my instruments, put my hands inside you, and my hands began moving by themselves . . . for eight hours they moved by themselves.  I never knew what the next move would be.  Your God healed you; I simply held the instruments for Him."
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S74rw4rd commented on: Oceans Apart - 1999 by amberkaye 48 weeks 2 days ago
Well, I should like to think: Well, I should like to think that your work has been waiting patiently for you to resume when the situation improved.  I wish you the best in your endeavors.  In my own case, which I do not presume to dare to compare to yours, I wanted to write Poetry since October 13th of 1975, and the first real poem did not arrive until sometime in the summer of 1994; nineteen years of wait time.  I am an old man now, with a lot of medical afflictions, but the poems keep coming---for which I thank the Lord most humbly.
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amberkaye commented on: Oceans Apart - 1999 by amberkaye 48 weeks 2 days ago
Thanks, I am grateful for: Thanks, I am grateful for your comment as well. I noticed I joined this site less than 6 months before I stopped writing, not for lack of trying. I wish I could find a way to write again, but in saying that... I am beginning to think the reason I developed writer's block was because of the psych meds I'd been put on 2 months before... and I've just gotten off them after about 21 years. Wish me luck! I have a book I started in 1995 and haven't been able to finish.
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S74rw4rd commented on: Oceans Apart - 1999 by amberkaye 48 weeks 2 days ago
Yes it is.  I have been a: Yes it is.  I have been a member for over twenty years.  I have seen a lot of changes here, mostly positive.  There are some very fine Poets, and a few (but they are a few too many)  poserus who think they are Poets and are not.  I love this site, and I am very grateful to Jason for providing it to us. I am grateful for your reply as well.
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amberkaye commented on: Oceans Apart - 1999 by amberkaye 48 weeks 2 days ago
Thank you :)   I've logged on: Thank you :)   I've logged on a few times recently and not seen many on. Is the site still active?
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