It takes uncommon skill to: It takes uncommon skill to turn anguish into outstanding art.
What a ride! Every twist and turn of intricate thought, every juxtaposition of words, every jolt of unsettling reality was penned with sheer brilliance.
How I wanted to swim against some of your stark, immersive waves of defeat and travail, but I have been in this place at times myself and made the same observations about society that I couldn't help making a strong connection to your words. The fury, the catharsis, at the end was palpable.
A spectacular and explosive study of despair. Amazing stuff.
Yes, its not easy,,: Yes, it's not easy in the morning
When you find as day is dawning
You start to get that certain feeling
A part of your anatomy
A part I will not mention, see
Is pointing toward the ceiling
Oh, but you must go to work
Alas, there is no time to jerk..
How did the horse..: How did the horse
Meet this handsome guy?
The guy met the horse
Through a butterfly
How did the butterfly
Get mixed up in this?
I have no clue
Give me a kiss
I won't kiss you
Why not, my dear?
You have bad breath
That much is clear
What if I bought
A bottle of Scope?
Think that will work?
We can only hope.
Stunning on so many levels,: Stunning on so many levels, masterful Poet. The imagery, an accomplishment in itself, is a poignant, highly symbolic undercurrent for your deeply moving introspection. In the end, emblems of sweetness and life triumph over the sour taste of life's struggles.
Majestic and timeless and so much more! I'm blown away!
I love your thoughts on this,: I love your thoughts on this, absolutely beautiful! It's exactly these interactions, where others can take the art and find ways it speaks to them, which creating art is all about!Thank you for reading and for taking the extra time to comment and express your take.