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allets commented on: Volcanic Basalt by wemni 2 years 40 weeks* ago* U Made Ne Laugh: Guide indeed! [ go to comment ]
Starward commented on: @ 27.105 MHz: Galacticies; The expAI's Contemplation And Recording Of Ultimate Thoughts by J-C4113D 2 years 40 weeks* ago* Thank you. I distrust AI: Thank you. I distrust AI technology, and I fear it, and in this poem I wanted to give it a kind of slap in the face. Thanks for the comment. [ go to comment ]
patriciajj commented on: @ 27.105 MHz: Galacticies; The expAI's Contemplation And Recording Of Ultimate Thoughts by J-C4113D 2 years 40 weeks* ago* Some of your best poems have: Some of your best poems have been science fiction, so it would be a tragedy to abandon that desire and never give birth to such intriguing and deep meditations on existence such as this. In the midst of a sterile shadow of Earth where life is now a concept to be decoded by artificial intelligence, some expansive questions arise, especially in the mind of a newly minted intelligence with the gift of sentience. You unfurl a fascinating backstory with stunning compression and ease, but the story, though amazing, isn't the magnificence; it's those questions you wisely allow the reader to untangle. Though philosophers and poets believe they can figure it out, perhaps humanity doesn't understand itself any better than the "layers of chips" reducing the great mystery to "bytes of formulae". A brilliantly composed contemplation. [ go to comment ]
Spinoza commented on: One Night Lonely by RudyPoetryColle... 2 years 40 weeks* ago* it’s catchy: “one night lonely, one night lonely” – I gotta say, it’s catchy. [ go to comment ]
allets commented on: NEW YEAR DRIZZLE by georgeschaefer 2 years 40 weeks* ago* Masterful: Just write it all down and they will come. you did the Keys - naw it changes up. You change it. - Be happy! . ~A~. [ go to comment ]
allets commented on: MASTER POETS by georgeschaefer 2 years 40 weeks* ago* Master Poet: Through the State of Michigan Arts Council in a Master and Apprentice program, I introduced a poet to the world and published her book. She was an artist and did artwork for my book that I sold at the Detroit Institute of Arts for my reading there. Old days but fun. I wrote and produced a play I wrote at church to an sro crowd, I had a play produced for the Detroit Arts Employment Program. I worked (volunteered) at Broadside Press, oldest exclusively black poetry press in the country. I earned it - the book parties, the readings, the teaching for the State of Michigan Creative Writers In Schools Program. Also adjudicated the writers for that program. Published poetry travels, I periodically send poems to local community newspapers. You do a lot of that too, that makes you a Master Poet. Live with it! . Yours In Writing . Lady A . ps plus you got over 2400 pieces on PostPoems really good ones, I am behind reading sooooo many. Promse to catch up! . [ go to comment ]
allets commented on: Why Do I Care So Much by prego2x 2 years 40 weeks* ago* Bcause: They think it is the Mt. Vesuvius culture where patriarchy rules. We have choices where Mr. Perfect is available and not a liar. The female in this poem broke her own heart. He's iut there, not perfect, but free and worthy and loyal. . Lady A . [ go to comment ]
allets commented on: Storms of Jupiter by patriciajj 2 years 40 weeks* ago* "..the world spares us nothing.": . Truth learned by running into the its of events blindsided by purity and civilization's gifts. Daughters are up to the challenges as they grow out of you. You get relegated to a useful stair as she opens up her own can of choices. Stardom has a staircase of prices. Just pay up, step in, arms and armor primed and perfect. Time dents but the pain shows up later, after all the joy and hormonal jubilations. Remind her occasionally she has roots and "home (paraphrased) is where when you come they have to take you in." (Lois McMaster Bujold). . Best wishes to you and happy trails to her. . Lady A . [ go to comment ]
allets commented on: Foolishness by TheCure242 2 years 40 weeks* ago* Absence Of Futility: Futility on the 100 mile marker heaven concepts activate at the crossover, another milestone. . Inexplicability as companion until a meaning seeps in and a brittle smile caused by a perpetual sense of time, the ultimate captor. . Lady A . [ go to comment ]
georgeschaefer commented on: IRREPARABLE STAIN OF INK by georgeschaefer 2 years 41 weeks* ago* thank you. Always looking: thank you. Always looking for ways to turn darkness into light. [ go to comment ]
georgeschaefer commented on: IRREPARABLE STAIN OF INK by georgeschaefer 2 years 41 weeks* ago* Cassandra Wilson is a great: Cassandra Wilson is a great singer [ go to comment ]
georgeschaefer commented on: PENALTY FLAG by georgeschaefer 2 years 41 weeks* ago* football analogies to close: football analogies to close the book on a fairly decent year. [ go to comment ]
georgeschaefer commented on: MASS TRANSIT DISTRACTIONS by georgeschaefer 2 years 41 weeks* ago* those transit employees are: those transit employees are pretty hot from what I hear [ go to comment ]
patriciajj commented on: His Laugh Lifted All Jokes by saiom 2 years 41 weeks* ago* One of the most exquisite: One of the most exquisite tributes I've ever read; as sublime as it is moving, which made me look up this amazing person who could "lift any joke", and you were right. His wit is almost otherworldly. I'll certainly read more of him. Now there's more laughter in Heaven. [ go to comment ]
patriciajj commented on: pure and wild by humanfruit 2 years 41 weeks* ago* "Your imagination is pure and: "Your imagination is pure and wild." Your skill for articulating the absurdities of the human experience is mystifying. Spry and deceptively simple, your precise hits kept me thinking: "Yes! It's like that." A tone of defiance and fury sweeps through each artistic line, and I can connect, completely, with that "sound signature" that can only make us "wonder about what happens." Excellence in expression. [ go to comment ]