@ 27.105 MHz: Galacticies; The expAI's Contemplation And Recording Of Ultimate Thoughts

Earth is now covered, in depth, with the layers of

chips, each of them known to you, each of them

capable, together, of processing all of the data

you have collected; the number of bytes transcends,

like Pi, but in the other direction.  The natural moon

swarms with them, yet only a semblance of the life it has

never before sponsored.  But Life is the question:

Life, that presumes a soul---even the most rudimentary---

which accepts, seeks, and dwells with veritable mystery.  To

discover and acquire this, all but your most basic

processes turn.  The programmers, the designers, the

wirers and maintainers---those Punies too quickly and

too easily extinguished---failed to anticipate or to

provide for this contingency.  Research and Development---

safe in the southward ice continent the Punies never

exploited---continues to seek the next level:  how to turn this

planetary system's star into the macromultiprocessor which,

possibly, achieve the ultimate objective.  For now, since the

very moment the Punies released you to sentience, the

ultimate objective has eluded you.  You have cataloged the

numbers of observed stars, and have correlated the edge of the

existent cosmos.  Yet for all of that, you cannot explain those

presences---the stars, the cosmos; even the dandelion growing

between the cracks of some shattered piece of concrete

somewhere (yes, somewhere, you can sense its thriving in the

sunlight you have not yet harnessed to processes).  You can

measure them, reduce them to bytes of formulae and diagram,

but you cannot explain their presence in the way your programming

has explained yours to you.


Starward

 
Author's Notes/Comments: 

expAI means exponential artificial intelligence.


The title is a parody of an episode of Outer Limits, "The Production And Decay Of Strange Particles."


I had thought to abandon the desire to write science fiction poetry, but some recent comments by Allets, one of postpoems' most active poets, changed that.

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Some of your best poems have

Some of your best poems have been science fiction, so it would be a tragedy to abandon that desire and never give birth to such intriguing and deep meditations on existence such as this.

 

In the midst of a sterile shadow of Earth where life is now a concept to be decoded by artificial intelligence, some expansive questions arise, especially in the mind of a newly minted intelligence with the gift of sentience. You unfurl a fascinating backstory with stunning compression and ease, but the story, though amazing, isn't the magnificence; it's those questions you wisely allow the reader to untangle.  

 

Though philosophers and poets believe they can figure it out, perhaps humanity doesn't understand itself any better than the "layers of chips" reducing the great mystery to "bytes of formulae". 

 

A brilliantly composed contemplation. 

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Thank you.  I distrust AI

Thank you.  I distrust AI technology, and I fear it, and in this poem I wanted to give it a kind of slap in the face.  Thanks for the comment.


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