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allets commented on: COOKIE by chris 2 years 33 weeks ago
What A 1st Line!: Sorry Cookie is gone.
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allets commented on: o Doom by Tsenumaic 2 years 33 weeks ago
Back: With style
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allets commented on: asterisk by Tsenumaic 2 years 33 weeks ago
Last Verse: Rocks!
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allets commented on: Lack of Humility by Khaleesi 2 years 33 weeks ago
Trapped: oh you are so mch a victim. Hope this is  not a true story. You have my heart bleedin if this is your life. just a situation observed maybe. This is too sad. Solvable, but keep crying. weepng is a release.   Lady A
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Khaleesi commented on: What If? by exthias1983 2 years 33 weeks ago
I can really relate to this,: I can really relate to this, it is way too often that one feels there is no way out :( 
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patriciajj commented on: + 27.225 MHz: Epigram On Feet Toward Clay, Soul Toward Christ by J-C4113D 2 years 33 weeks ago
From star stuff to a voice of: From star stuff to a voice of profound splendor: In this mind-stretching, light-drenched introspection, you do what is impossible for most writers and that is to capture our place in the infinite scheme of things.   This magnificent song of praise takes a huge leap into the mystery of our very existence—a jump far too difficult for philosophers, let alone poets, so I was stunned by the third line, only to be blown away by the fourth.    We will remember you. 
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patriciajj commented on: Many Paths by saiom 2 years 33 weeks ago
A beautiful way to encourage: A beautiful way to encourage us to respect other people's belief systems. Such an inclusive world view would have changed history and spared humankind much violence and misery. If the ultimate destination is Love and its Source, this is an important part of the roadmap. Well said! 
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allets commented on: Fade Away by exthias1983 2 years 33 weeks ago
Like: Smoke from a cigarette...our love since the day we met is fading away - Temptations . Well love is love and not fade away - Stones . ~A~
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patriciajj commented on: Because I love you by humanfruit 2 years 33 weeks ago
An excellent description of: An excellent description of the agonizing quandary we find ourselves in when we're torn between our loving instincts and the "wild whirlwind" that drags us down to the level of "learning how to sin".  Your deft use of contrast (the title vs the turbulent reality), swift lines and striking emotion make this poem extremely intense. 
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allets commented on: Massive Heart Attack by randyjohnson 2 years 33 weeks ago
I Have A Friend: weighing in at 450 - diet not likey. she is 71 with three kids and two grands (last count). You never know how weak or strong a heart can be. I weigh in at 142 - who know when or what will take you down. Good cautionary tale diet and exercise. A good reminder - his kids will stay fit maybe. A father's loss is behavior changing (avoidable or not). . Good write! ~A~. H
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Starward commented on: Poet by owlcrkbrg 2 years 33 weeks ago
That is such an inspiring: That is such an inspiring poem . . . .
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saiom commented on: High Desert by owlcrkbrg 2 years 34 weeks ago
response: unique powerful metaphor
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saiom commented on: Island by owlcrkbrg 2 years 34 weeks ago
beautiful and sad: beautiful and sad
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saiom commented on: One Windy, May, Day by owlcrkbrg 2 years 34 weeks ago
response: did laughter lift the kite
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saiom commented on: Such a Dream by owlcrkbrg 2 years 34 weeks ago
response:   the desire for rest vs the illusory fear of extinction .. some remember in amazing detail some of their past lives
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