Because I love you

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Every single second

I feel like I am dying

This is all there is

Stop it, stop the lying

I can’t compute

I can’t compete

In your wild whirlwind

Learning how to sin

 

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It is wonderful that you can't compete in such a world



 

 

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An excellent description of

An excellent description of the agonizing quandary we find ourselves in when we're torn between our loving instincts and the "wild whirlwind" that drags us down to the level of "learning how to sin".  Your deft use of contrast (the title vs the turbulent reality), swift lines and striking emotion make this poem extremely intense.