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Starward commented on: + 27.225 MHz: Cosmological Constant by J-C4113D 2 years 24 weeks ago
Thank you.: Thank you.
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Starward commented on: Faceplant by humanfruit 2 years 24 weeks ago
The American writer, Mark: The American writer, Mark Twain, once likened inspiration to a well which, from time to time, needs to be replenished fresh water from the spring that feeds it.  He wrote that the feeling of loosing inspiration, to which you alluded above, is really only one of those times when the replenishment needs a little time to refill the well.  This, Mark Twain, suggested was natural.      Or, if you like, read Mary Shelley's "Introduction" to the 1831 edition of Frankenstein, in which she describes the initial lack of inspiration followed by the sudden shock of its arrival.     Or Wallace Stevens, whose poetic inspiration faltered, in 1923 with the commercial and critical failure of his first book of poems, and remainded silent until approximately 1929, when a new surge of inspiration approached and remained with him until his death in 1955.
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allets commented on: Killing is not as hard as the innocent believe by Daniel-59 2 years 24 weeks ago
What Goes On: in the mind of one who has killed one life or many - a poem for reflection. Vengeance breeds retaliation which is why I am pro-gun ownership by citizens. I want the biggest fasted deliverer of death every created available. If anyone comes looking for retribution in mass, managing to get past homeland and the military to reach our doors to squeeze triggers and acquire anything, I want to greet them with a warm welcome. Could I kill? Oh yeah. Will I burn in hell for it? I take the fifth. . ~allets~ .    
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allets commented on: Stay ! by Daniel-59 2 years 24 weeks ago
Wrote Poem 04-25-22: Fabulous image. ~A~
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lyrycsyntyme commented on: Facebook by metaphorist 2 years 24 weeks ago
Interesting reflection on a sliver of your existance : ..which is trying to drive itself into the center of your life. Yet, I somehow doubt you're most meaningful memories are stored on facebook. Additionally, if we recognize our chosen words of yesterday as less mature than we wish they were, then we're doing something right - growing : )  All the best to you.
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lyrycsyntyme commented on: To Hell With It All by metaphorist 2 years 24 weeks ago
If you can write out the struggle,: ..which you have done incredibly well, as far as I can see, then you can - piece  by piece - get to solutions that feed the deepest, most meaningful desires of your soul. Traps are laid for all of us by the world we live in, and I'm not sure that any of us can possibly avoid them. But feeling their jaws and teeth means you are so very much alive, and the energy will be there to pry yourself free.
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lyrycsyntyme commented on: Faceplant by humanfruit 2 years 24 weeks ago
A feeling emanates: ..that your lips, a coconut shell, and the sun a fierce machete. Or is that just how I feel when I spend too many hours in the field without proper hydration and my lips crack Either way, the thought brought to me by your words.   Sometimes, inspiration seems to wander into a desert. That is when survival kicks in and keeps us going, until the oasis appears. The beautiful thing about writing is that the effect is just as good if the oasis is a mirage, as when it's real. ; )
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elliot_jordan2003 commented on: Soldier your not by elliot_jordan2003 2 years 24 weeks ago
When I'm high the: When I'm high the creativeness comes from what I was eating lol
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elliot_jordan2003 commented on: Demons Drink by elliot_jordan2003 2 years 24 weeks ago
Wow thanks for the commen..: Wow thanks for the commen..
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patriciajj commented on: On the Trail Between Orchids and the Otherworld by patriciajj 2 years 24 weeks ago
Loving your very accurate and: Loving your very accurate and beautiful interpretation. It means so much. Thank you! 
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allets commented on: Turmoil In Need Of A Stand by LittleLennonGurl 2 years 24 weeks ago
And: Self-denial, hard for a species dedicated to hiearchic lifestyles. We think in tiers climbing in search of ultimate security/happiness. while some of us attain it, most never will. I give you: HOMO SAPIEN. . ~A~. 
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allets commented on: Demons Drink by elliot_jordan2003 2 years 24 weeks ago
Cycle: Repeatng a down-spiral cadence as familiar as pass me a paper cup. Mom  had four of us under one hand and a drink in the other. She taught me how to love  reading novels before she vanished. . ~A~. 
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Molly commented on: On the Trail Between Orchids and the Otherworld by patriciajj 2 years 24 weeks ago
The tone flows: Clear, concise examples of the world's mirror in a very youthful cheer
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Molly commented on: Faceplant by humanfruit 2 years 24 weeks ago
Thanks guys: I'm losing poetic inspiration lately, but your comments are the sustenance I need to keep me going.
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allets commented on: Soldier your not by elliot_jordan2003 2 years 24 weeks ago
Uktimate Slam: "lollie and pop"? ROFLAO Please stay refreshingly around. Please. . Lady A z .
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