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Starward commented on: side by side by Southern_Violinist 2 years 19 weeks ago
Though the poem is very: Though the poem is very brief, tremedous confidence radiates from it.    Great poem.
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patriciajj commented on: And The Court Says by allets 2 years 19 weeks ago
Absolutely true! Just when: Absolutely true! Just when we see some progress, we're back in a prehistoric hellscape of hate and ignorance. How I wish I could argue with your assessment that our "symbols mean/ the statue/ of servitude", but I can't.    "By the time you figure what piece you are in the game game over or game change or time served means end game."   Those superb lines hit the mark with heartbreaking precision. Reality hurts but this needs to be said. You did it well.   
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crypticbard commented on: + 1ST POEMS: The Answer Given To Some Discouraging Moment by J-C4113D 2 years 19 weeks ago
poetically! yes!: poetically! yes!
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Starward commented on: + 1ST POEMS: The Answer Given To Some Discouraging Moment by J-C4113D 2 years 19 weeks ago
I am soooo sorry I failed to: I am soooo sorry I failed to acknowledge this comment.
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crypticbard commented on: Song of Stone by patriciajj 2 years 19 weeks ago
For some reason this reminds: For some reason this reminds me of the Grand Canyon and other such places. It is a blessing to those who perceive it and for those who only see stone, places such as these are quite deadly for the unmindful travellers. Pardon if I went off topic. Thanks for sharing.
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patriciajj commented on: Sacred Crone by patriciajj 2 years 19 weeks ago
Thank you so much for your: Thank you so much for your brilliant expression and your understanding of my vision. Coming from such a gifted and insightful poet, it means so much. 
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patriciajj commented on: Sacred Crone by patriciajj 2 years 19 weeks ago
I accidentally posted my: I accidentally posted my response to your wonderful feedback above instead of using "reply". Didn't want you to think this went unappreciated. 
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crypticbard commented on: Day by osiriss- 2 years 19 weeks ago
"Life destroyed by: "Life destroyed by technology" that is a very sobering thought because of its addictive reality.
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crypticbard commented on: Post-coma by owlcrkbrg 2 years 19 weeks ago
Hope it isn't rude to answer: Hope it isn't rude to answer based on the first two suppositions. Gripping read. Thanks for sharing.
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crypticbard commented on: SOONISH by mil57man 2 years 19 weeks ago
Very hopeful and purposeful.: Very hopeful and purposeful. There is a surety of knowing even when it hasn't itself been presented yet. Thanks for sharing.
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allets commented on: Slipping Gears in Reality by Beavis 2 years 19 weeks ago
Go Beav: "...feeling /something /beyond"  Great line. Good 2 read U . :D ~A~
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allets commented on: To Be Near You by rachel 2 years 19 weeks ago
Cool: Truth in writing.Wit rocks. (No?) ~A~
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crypticbard commented on: Slipping Gears in Reality by Beavis 2 years 19 weeks ago
realistically surreal.: realistically surreal. Everything seems to be filtered and made sense of in our thoughts, what we know, what we don't, and the things that we are on the fence about. I like the title as it suggests; remember driving an old van once and its gears slipped between 2nd and 3rd, it was a sweaty task to get it to navigate the busy streets doing deliveries. Nowadays, automatics are the choice transmission.
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crypticbard commented on: And The Court Says by allets 2 years 19 weeks ago
story of my life. How strange: story of my life. How strange that what we grew up knowing is no longer or changing. Such instability is not good for people and nation. 
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crypticbard commented on: In Tall Grass by Psysped 2 years 19 weeks ago
As mom always says, 'empty: As mom always says, 'empty the bladder before leaving the house.' This was a fun read. Thanks for sharing.
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