Although the last phrase of: Although the last phrase of the last line stumbled me, I really like that first stanza's words: I am writing for the beach / where the moon meets the lake. That phrase is magnificent.
I experienced this, for the: I experienced this, for the first time and not the last, in January of 1978, when my then college sweetheart announced---at lunch among several of our mutual friends---that our relationship was over (and that table got very silent very quickly). The short lines of your poem keeps the emotion flowing, and that emotion spoke volumes to me as I read it. I am sorry you have had to experience this sort of thing, but you describe it with verbal skill.
I applaud your attitude,: I applaud your attitude, which is an example to us all. However, that word "had" is past tense. And you, and your posted poems, are very much in the present tense. And the many poems you have ahead of you are still in the future tense.
Because you are an: Because you are an irreplaceable pillar of this site, your sincere and powerfully moving expression is an example for all of us follow: and that example is to make things right. You are certainly part of what makes this platform more than a landing place for poems, but a community.
And the links were an enjoyable bonus.
God bless you, peaceful poet.
I can't think of a better way: I can't think of a better way to inspire acceptance, open-mindedness and kindness than this radiant expression. Certainly more unites us in our hopes and dreams than divides us in our moments of ignorance and fear.
Kudos for being a peacemaker and a guiding light.
I second everything the pro,: I second everything the pro, Starward, said and tip my hat to you as well. You show us how it's done with lines like these:
"In a world of too much and
Never enough
No void unfilled
No concrete undefiled"
Throughout this swift and disarmingly candid expression, you turn raw emotion into a captivating, free-spirited, drumming rhythm suggesting a heart on fire. There's an elegance about what it means to be human. And your finale . . . wow, who could do better than: "I miss you sanity/ Lost sometimes" to summarize how we all feel about our own chaos within.
A spectacular introspection.
I have the start of Lung Cancer: Reguardless the out come Starward, God has brought me comfort!
Always had funny things to write about and serious poems also,
I had fun!
William J. Roney III
I am glad you kept that: I am glad you kept that Crucifix, and I applaud your attendance at Saint Philips! And thank you for your service in the Army.
I have another Crucifix, which I keep on the table by the chair to which my condition confines me, which, at each of the four ends of the two beams, has small glass enclosure which contain items from the Holy Land: gravel, flower petals, incense, and myrhh. While the latter three are of recent gathering, as all plants must be, the gravel may have been there at the time Jesus was living there; it may have even been on one of the paths He trod. The Crucifix also has a sunburst behind the Savior's image's head---a symbol that has fascinated me since I acquired my first Crucifix at the age of five years old.
Thank you for telling me those aspects about yourself, and I hope to be able to hear future good news about your illness---that is my prayer.
I also have a Crucifix : I also have a Crucifix in my Briefcase my Wife gave
me when we were dating in 1983 before I went to the Army.
I kept it ever since, she was Catholic at the time before we were married.
Now after the accident in 1986, we got a divorce in 1988 and I went to school for Poetry in 1989.
ST. Philips was the College I went to.
God was there for me!
I am very glad for your: I am very glad for your presence on Postpoems; and, although we have not had much interaction or communication, I applaud this testimony you have posted, and I am very thankful for that final paragraph, "Let's continue to be here . . ." which describes and summarizes one of the chiefest aspects of Postpoems, of which I am so thankful to be a member, and to be a member among such fine, fine Poets and human beings. Our individual differences are like the themes and variations within a Sonata, but our great similarity---being Human---is the Sonata that makes those themes and variations possible. Like Pop Stevens said in one of his greatest poems, "Being there together is enough."
The cross, or the crucifix,: The cross, or the crucifix, is the ultimate Christian symbol, regardless of what denomination, or no denomination, one embraces. I wear a metallic blue crucifix, with my screen name on the reverse side of the cross beam, on a chain around my neck, and it reminds me at all times not only of my Faith, but to rely upon that Faith to see me through. I join my prayers to yours for the relief of pain.