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patriciajj commented on: Can you taste the commotion? by humanfruit 1 year 44 weeks ago
I'm there and I'm feeling it.: I'm there and I'm feeling it. You did an expert job creating a frantic, claustrophobic and hostile atmosphere that reflects the inner discord of the diners. A highly significant poem that has the impact of postmodernist art. Brilliant title as well. 
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Starward commented on: Moonlight Sonata by gentle 1 year 44 weeks ago
Forgive me for failing to: Forgive me for failing to respond to your gracious reply in a timely manner.  
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Starward commented on: The Forest Ranger by gentle 1 year 44 weeks ago
It is a privilege to comment: It is a privilege to comment on a poem posted so early in Postpoems' history, and so well-written a tribute.  The last three lines present a profound perspective from which, alas, too many of us (including my sorry self) have turned.
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Starward commented on: Fifty Five Below by gentle 1 year 44 weeks ago
Humorous in the best way, and: Humorous in the best way, and those short lines give the poem a driving momentum right to the final line.
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Starward commented on: Love Song by gentle 1 year 44 weeks ago
I love poems that contain: I love poems that contain astronomical images, and this one deploys them right at the outset.  Although an integral part of this very fine poem, the first four lines constitute a poem of their own, an aphoristic poem.  It is an honor and a delight to be able to comment on this poem, written by one of Postpoems' first Poets and, therefore, a pioneer of online Poetry.
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ramonathompsont commented on: TWO FINGER EYE GOUGE by georgeschaefer 1 year 44 weeks ago
cool write  : cool write  
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Starward commented on: inimitable contrivances by arqios 1 year 44 weeks ago
Please forgive my delay in: Please forgive my delay in replying . . . I am struggling with non-Covid flu right now, from my grandson's kindergarten.  I had forgotten about Piper Beam, of whom I had read but whose stories I have not been able to read.  And let me say again how much I like your poem.  I like to read science fiction poetry online, but yours is superior to many I have read, and I am not just saying that; I really do mean it.
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Starward commented on: Silver Voice by rachel 1 year 44 weeks ago
This is provides excellent: This is provides excellent reading, but those last three paragraphs are very, very profound. I am not usually a prose reader, but I am very impressed with this one.
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crypticbard commented on: first by alxorange 1 year 44 weeks ago
Centre stage and along the: Centre stage and along the footlights!
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crypticbard commented on: The kids these days are all using this word called “ironic” by humanfruit 1 year 44 weeks ago
And that's probably the most: And that's probably the most delicious thing of all! Tolkien had his why not us!
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Pungus commented on: The kids these days are all using this word called “ironic” by humanfruit 1 year 44 weeks ago
Justice Wolf: Howl, our victim is stuffed Like the turkey he just Greedily gross gluttonized * Oh, impossible riddles Surround the cemetery- How the ghosts know, Blanketing corpses cozy
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lyrycsyntyme commented on: The kids these days are all using this word called “ironic” by humanfruit 1 year 44 weeks ago
Consumers often don't see the: Consumers often don't see the wolf at the top of the ridge, counting their calories for them.
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Pungus commented on: The kids these days are all using this word called “ironic” by humanfruit 1 year 44 weeks ago
Urban dictionary: And then there's the potential product of puzzling it all together through multiple generations and coming out with one's own personalized slanguage.
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Pungus commented on: The kids these days are all using this word called “ironic” by humanfruit 1 year 44 weeks ago
Newborn=fresh flesh: Long as you don't cry when the tordando sweeps it up and you're left with insuffient funds for your family's survival rations. Who'll be dancing then?
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lyrycsyntyme commented on: The kids these days are all using this word called “ironic” by humanfruit 1 year 44 weeks ago
Are you starting a dance crazy? Everyone do The Ironic. : A catchy dance for kids and adults, a like. We already have the steps down and don't even know it.   "I've been doing really well at managing my money this year - Should I reward myself with a sixty two inch t.v.?"
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