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crypticbard commented on: Fog by metaphorist 1 year 39 weeks ago
Such walks are such a turn: Such walks are such a turn around so much that even without great expectations that the clarity offered is such a pleasant surprise with its pure and unbridled liberatimy joy!
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FLboy555 commented on: Sparkles and Glims by FLboy555 1 year 39 weeks ago
Thanks : I'm astounded in a good way, that you enjoyed reading my poetry.
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Starward commented on: Casting Down Arguments And Every High Thing That Exalts Itself by J-C4113D 1 year 39 weeks ago
Thank you so very much!: Thank you so very much!
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patriciajj commented on: Collective Dream by patriciajj 1 year 39 weeks ago
Thank you again. And again,: Thank you again. And again, radiant Poet. 
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patriciajj commented on: Casting Down Arguments And Every High Thing That Exalts Itself by J-C4113D 1 year 39 weeks ago
Amazing, the serendipity that: Amazing, the serendipity that falls upon your path. You're a hundred percent correct: there's nothing random about this lurch forward that is propelling you into exciting new territory. Although tragedy led to your discovery of Yook Woo Dang, upon the ruins you'll build towers, word by radiant word.     I'm going to be busier than usual (and that's going-insane type of busy), so in case I forget, I want to say "Happy January 9th!"   Brightest blessings, essential Poet.  
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Starward commented on: Collective Dream by patriciajj 1 year 39 weeks ago
I consider myself privileged: I consider myself privileged to be able to---in your splendid words---take notes along your journey, because that process is what I prepared for (outside my official studies) during my undergrad years.  I wanted to study a living Poet's steady accretion of poems in its process; but I had only the ability to study dead poets' completed processes and accomplishments.  Even Mary Shelley, as much as I love and loved her (she is always "my girl"), was still, essentially, a writer from the past, whose accomplishment was settled before my great-great grandparents were alive.  I hope the notes I make along the journey will help others to delve deeply into your work; and I am content for my conclusions, like those of S. F. Morse regarding Wallace Stevens' poems, to be overturned by others who will see your work in its final and finest form.  I am glad, and will always be glad during whatever lifespan I have left, for the privilege of reading your Poetry, and entering into the sacred precincts of your magnificent cosmic vision.
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Starward commented on: Face to Face by metaphorist 1 year 39 weeks ago
You are welcome.  It is: You are welcome.  It is always a pleasure to acknowledge one of PostPoem's Finest, and the example you set.
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metaphorist commented on: Face to Face by metaphorist 1 year 39 weeks ago
Thank you so much! I: Thank you so much! I sincerely appreciate your kind words!!
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Starward commented on: Face to Face by metaphorist 1 year 39 weeks ago
I have, for some time,: I have, for some time, believed that you are one of PostPoems' senior poets---senior not in number of years of membership (for what is a year but, simply, one planetary jaunt around the sun and back) but in the accomplishment of your Poetry.  This poem certainly fits in with that opinion of your work.  I believe you speak for many who are unable to speak for themselves; and you articulate emotional nuances---both good and bad, positive and negative---in ways that those for whom you speak can appropriate to explain to themselves their own emotional nuances, but in terms you provide for them.  Your Poetry is literate; timely (always of the now); and utterly necessary in the way it expresses those emotions for others---and gives them the comfort and certainty of hearing their own feelings expressed so well.  Some poets on this site write poems that belong in a museum; a few write poems that are so atrocious they deserve to be used to wrap fish or paper-train puppies; and a few Poets write the poems that nourish and sustain the soul . . . and you are in that particular group, as a nourisher and sustainer of souls for your readers.  If I had a hat on, I would tip my hat to you, Metaphorist, because you are one of the great ones on PostPoems.  But, in reality, I am just an old man half paralyzed in a lift chair while my body continues to sabatoge what is left of my life.  Still, from my chair I can applaud you in these words of sincere appreciation for your work.
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patriciajj commented on: Collective Dream by patriciajj 1 year 39 weeks ago
Oh what can I say? Anyone who: Oh what can I say? Anyone who has ever had the privilege of being reviewed by you knows that you never skim the surface of a poem. You explore its undercurrents and nuances, and even apply anecdotes with personal significance. It truly is a pleasure to have one's ruminations analyzed by a literary mind reader.   Just can't begin to thank you!   I'm thrilled that you made a connection with my strategy to illustrate that gifts can be found in the extremes of nature as they are found in the contrasts of life. With deft style, you shared your own experiences of brutal winter weather that brought grief to others but became an almost sacred refuge to you. Your memories movingly crystallized part of the message, but you, never satisfied to stay on the shore, continued diving until you emerged with everything I was hoping a reader would find.   I often rhapsodize about winter, but the truth is I generally hate, I mean, hate winter, but I love a dichotomy, an effortless koan; they appear in abundance in nature and give us opportunities to wrest some meaning from an existence some say is only survival.   Thank you for taking such beautiful notes along my journey.  
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Starward commented on: WALKLING BAREFOOT IN THE SAND by joy 1 year 39 weeks ago
More years ago than I care to: More years ago than I care to admit, I was compelled (in September following my high school graduation) to attend a college a couple of hours, by highway, from my home; and thus I had to live on campus.  But one of the unexpected advantages was to find that the campus landscape emphasized more lawn and flowerbeds than pavement.  It even had a small creek running through it; and its center was a tree-lined, flowery, area where none of the hallmarks of nature---including large stone, the creek itself, and such---had been removed to make way for expansion of the facility.  In our geographical area, during that particular "weather decade," autumns continued quite warm until nearly the end of October; and springs began to warm up by early to mid-April.  (The present global warming may have increased this temperate period.)  I then quickly discovered that a good many of the students attended class, or took meals in the dining hall, or made purchases in the bookstore entirely shoeless; mostly barefoot, some wearing just socks.  The trimmed lawns on either edge of the sidewalks that connected all of the academic buildings and the dorms received a lot of pedestrian traffic.  The college enforced very little of a dress code; and footwear was not addressed.  One simply had to be aware, when on the sidewalks, of broken glass, or discarded rings from opened pop-cans, or other debris.  In the four years I was there, I never heard of---much less seen---any foot injuries from this aspect of our residential life there.  Even off-campus, some of this was maintained:  On a balmy Friday afternoon, I once walked to the post office (nine miles, one way) with my flipflops more often in my hands than on my feet.  We had no beaches on large bodies of water, but we did have well trimmed lawns next to almost every sidewalk, and three temperate seasons each year, and flipflops to get over a few uncooperaitve patches.  [I apologize for the typos in the original; I think I have corrected all of them.]
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Starward commented on: HEAVEN IN THE FOG by joy 1 year 39 weeks ago
The second line precisely and: The second line precisely and accurately nails the experience---it is like being in someone's painting (not sure I am familiar with Monet or what he painted).  I first began to notice fog during my undergrad years, and at times it completely blanketed the campus and the effects were both beautiful and eerie.  But it painted everything, regardless of original colors, in gray.  The second line of your poem definitely brought back that ancient memory.
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Starward commented on: Reinforcing its existence... by shewhodwellsint... 1 year 39 weeks ago
Thank you, and Happy: Thank you, and Happy (belated) New Year to you, as well.
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Starward commented on: Foggy Life by Sevailia 1 year 40 weeks ago
I have often experienced that: I have often experienced that same emotion, and you have described it quite accurately.
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Starward commented on: All trains have been delayed by WasteOfPaint 1 year 40 weeks ago
I like the ballad format with: I like the ballad format with which the narrative is presented.
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