Fog

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It was a chilly,
overcast morning.


I set out on my journey
unsure where the road
would take me.


Only this moment
was decided;
my next steps were hazy.


As I moved along,
I let the dawn
wash over me.


Then I noticed
the fog dissipating
with the rising sun.


My path became clear,
and my future brighter.

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S74rw4rd-13d's picture

Your skill with metaphor

Your skill with metaphor always amazes me.  I applaud the way you use local weather conditions and an ordinary sunrise, to convey emotional meaning; and not only that, but also the hope of positive changes.  


Starward-Led (in Chrismation, Januarius)

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Such walks are such a turn

Such walks are such a turn around so much that even without great expectations that the clarity offered is such a pleasant surprise with its pure and unbridled liberatimy joy!


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