Such a hauntingly rueful and: Such a hauntingly rueful and searching poem, I like the time analogy and how it wraps up in the end,
With more than one meaning
Ie out of time
Or
A timeless couple
Or
A timeless story
Or
A timeless pain that lives again and again
Thanks for sharing some beautifu and soulful l imagery. Cheerss
Revisitng this great poem, I: Revisitng this great poem, I am very disappointed in, and embarrassed by, the comment I posted last October. Yes, the other two poems have written better comments than mine, but what I failed to say is how much I admire how the presence of the missed person is both evokved and summoned by the various natural and local phenomena the Poet names. Part of a Poet's role is to name things: in that respect, Poetry began in Eden. By namin all the things that evoke the presence you miss, and bow they evoke it, you show us not only how to find the same comfort, but you also bear witness to the hope of Heaven, where wehere pain is forgotten and forgiveness is remembered. Wow! I don't think professional theologians could put it more poignantly.
Its so nice to look at things: Its so nice to look at things in a similar way a meeting of minds and windows of souls, cutnfirmnthe same cloth the views may be different but the details are interpreted similarly, not too much that nothing need be said and just enough commonality to not grow tiresome the phrase "you are my person" come to mind. What a lovely invitation! Shame its only for the one! Nicer than nice write!
Wonderful uplifting piece. I: Wonderful uplifting piece. I can feel the enthusiasm and positivity lepaing off the page! Well done, I needed to hear this today, Thankyou!
Beautiful! I felt filled with: Beautiful! I felt filled with the Holy Spirit when. I read this. Beautifully rendered etherial yet completely believable and reachable. Well done!
Sounds very satanic and: Sounds very satanic and uncomfortable. Strong imagery to haunt the mind. Hollywood wands and occult spells casting evil shadows for the depraved. I just wanted out. C ya!
Freedom
Captivity
Rage and: Freedom
Captivity
Rage and mercy
So much coiled.into this work
It hirt to read and yet I was compelled to read and re read and soak up the nuances and the explosive opportunities for ideas that float unhampered and unhampered through the universe. From a proud stallion to the pain of humiliation rising to rage
Majestic imagery with clear and relevant POVs.
The same savagery weilded by a machete can easily be matched by the whisper of a few words, when we harness what we admire for our own selfish gains it becomes not what it was and thus often despised. You can lead a horse ...but...
Flash to the quieting of dives cooing with fall of the veil of death peace freedom rage sloughs off into yesterday to the earth as the freedom pulls us up things the ether
Mercy knows where its at,
Sometimes you have to be on your knees for a different take and sometimes if not all times death can be merciful. Clearly an intense and affecting masterpiece.
Best blessingss