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SSmoothie commented on: Perfection Sacificed by a_whisper_away 1 year 27 weeks ago
Yes it is very much beyond: Yes it is very much beyond us, it may always be. Same as perfection. Beautifully and rather well said! Cheers Ss 
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SSmoothie commented on: Timeless by prodigal_prince 1 year 27 weeks ago
Such a hauntingly rueful and: Such a hauntingly rueful and searching poem, I like the time analogy and how it wraps up in the end,  With more than one meaning  Ie out of time  Or  A timeless couple  Or  A timeless story  Or  A timeless pain that lives again and again    Thanks for sharing some beautifu and soulful l imagery. Cheerss 
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Starward commented on: And I miss you by SSmoothie 1 year 27 weeks ago
Revisitng this great poem, I: Revisitng this great poem, I am very disappointed in, and embarrassed by, the comment I posted last October.  Yes, the other two poems have written better comments than mine, but what I failed to say is how much I admire how the presence of the missed person is both evokved and summoned by the various natural and local phenomena the Poet names.  Part of a Poet's role is to name things:  in that respect, Poetry began in Eden.  By namin all the things that evoke the presence you miss, and bow they evoke it, you show us not only how to find the same comfort, but you also bear witness to the hope of Heaven, where wehere pain is forgotten and forgiveness is remembered.  Wow!  I don't think professional theologians could put it more poignantly.
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SSmoothie commented on: Fractal Lives by Beavis 1 year 27 weeks ago
Its so nice to look at things: Its so nice to look at things in a similar way a meeting of minds and windows of souls, cutnfirmnthe same cloth the views may be different but the details are interpreted similarly, not too much that nothing need be said and just enough commonality to not grow tiresome the phrase "you are my person" come to mind. What a lovely invitation! Shame its only for the one! Nicer than nice write! 
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SSmoothie commented on: Unannounced by INKSTAIN 1 year 27 weeks ago
This is gorgeous! So sorry I: This is gorgeous! So sorry I never saw this before. Magnificent! Where are you? We need more if this! 
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SSmoothie commented on: And I miss you by SSmoothie 1 year 27 weeks ago
Thankyou so much. I still: Thankyou so much. I still miss her deeply. Hugss 
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SSmoothie commented on: the way you tell by Spinoza 1 year 27 weeks ago
Softly, softly catchy: Softly, softly catchy monkey... I felt hypnotised by the firelight, eyes heavy and feeling happy, warm and content,  nice write! 
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SSmoothie commented on: My Beautiful Despot by Spinoza 1 year 27 weeks ago
8ts just that easy to sink: 8ts just that easy to sink with that heavy metal vibe you are what you attract as they say. Well verbalised here. Nice one 
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SSmoothie commented on: Promise Of The Dawn by GailHudson 1 year 27 weeks ago
Wonderful uplifting piece. I: Wonderful uplifting piece. I can feel the enthusiasm and positivity lepaing off the page! Well done, I needed to hear this today, Thankyou! 
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SSmoothie commented on: Forgiveness by LornaRJ 1 year 27 weeks ago
Beautiful! I felt filled with: Beautiful! I felt filled with the Holy Spirit when. I read this. Beautifully rendered etherial yet completely believable and reachable. Well done! 
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SSmoothie commented on: our p.o.t.e.ntial by insightspinner 1 year 27 weeks ago
Epic! Well constructed: Epic! Well constructed elequent and resounding. Thank you for sharing.
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SSmoothie commented on: Serious drivel by Teytonon 1 year 27 weeks ago
What us the one thing? That: What us the one thing? That even blood goes down the drain?  Other than that nice work! Cheers ss 
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Starward commented on: Footnote: Theological Nuance by S74rw4rd 1 year 27 weeks ago
Thank you so very much for: Thank you so very much for that comment.  I appreciate your words and the time you took to visit the poem.
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SSmoothie commented on: Maniacal smile by humanfruit 1 year 27 weeks ago
Sounds very satanic and: Sounds very satanic and uncomfortable. Strong imagery to haunt the mind. Hollywood wands and occult spells casting evil shadows for the depraved. I just wanted out. C ya!
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SSmoothie commented on: Transcendence of Fury by patriciajj 1 year 27 weeks ago
Freedom  Captivity  Rage and: Freedom  Captivity  Rage and mercy  So much coiled.into this work  It hirt to read and yet I was compelled to read and re read and soak up the nuances and the explosive opportunities for ideas that float unhampered and unhampered  through the universe. From a proud stallion to the pain of humiliation rising to rage  Majestic imagery with clear and relevant POVs.  The same savagery weilded by a machete can easily be matched by the whisper of a few words,  when we harness  what we admire for our own selfish gains it becomes not what it was and thus often despised. You can lead a horse ...but... Flash to the quieting of dives cooing with fall of the veil of death peace freedom rage sloughs off into yesterday to the earth as the freedom pulls us up things the ether  Mercy knows where its at,  Sometimes you have to be on your knees for a different take and  sometimes if not all times death can be merciful. Clearly an intense and affecting masterpiece.  Best blessingss 
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