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Starward commented on: Bubbled up by humanfruit 1 year 26 weeks ago
I certainly agree with: I certainly agree with Stephen on that great line.
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Teytonon commented on: Owner of my Prison by Tortured_Poet 1 year 26 weeks ago
Who are you?: O P.O. U P.O.? U R P.O.? URE P.O.? URE POE? U RED POE? URE D POET? R U RED, POET? RT! URE D POET! O RT! URE D POET! TORTURED_POET
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patriciajj commented on: Its a Good Friday by SSmoothie 1 year 26 weeks ago
With wit, sincere devotion: With wit, sincere devotion and graceful charm, you lifted my spirits with these inspiring words. Your kind wishes and the reminder that miracles still happen dispelled so many shadows and was the perfect gift ahead of Easter Sunday. Rejoicing in this radiant expression.  
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Wordman commented on: Blinded by Wordman 1 year 26 weeks ago
Thankssss SS, glad you: Thankssss SS, glad you enjoyed this. 
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georgeschaefer commented on: CONTROL MY DEMONS by georgeschaefer 1 year 26 weeks ago
wow, that's a lot to digest. : wow, that's a lot to digest.  Thanks for reading and commenting
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jade commented on: I WILL WAIT by joy 1 year 26 weeks ago
❤️ talented..: ❤️ talented..
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jade commented on: A MOTHER'S LOVE by joy 1 year 26 weeks ago
Hey: This is beautiful..can't wait to read more..
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Starward commented on: Something. by sweetwater 1 year 26 weeks ago
With respect, I disagree that: With respect, I disagree that it sounds weird when written down.  I think you have stated it very well.  I think you have stated it so well that you should take a screenshot and file it on your computer, because that kind of statement can bloom into poems in the future.  Your description of the past and present flowing back and forth into each other reminds me of what little I know about electrical circuits---which may be an apt metaphor for that process.
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sweetwater commented on: Something. by sweetwater 1 year 26 weeks ago
I'm sure you are right, I've: I'm sure you are right, I've always thought poets have an insight into other realms, whether they realize it or not. personally I think the past and present flow constantly back and forth and at times overlap, which is perhaps when we 'see ghosts'. Sounds weird written down though. Many thank for reading and commenting,I appreciate it. sue.
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Starward commented on: Haiku melt by SSmoothie 1 year 26 weeks ago
This is FANTASTIC!  Very: This is FANTASTIC!  Very impressive.  I like the pattern that the inidividual poems create:  three Haiku, then two Senryu, and then a concluding Haiku.  This is an excellent reading experience.
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SSmoothie commented on: Blinded by Wordman 1 year 26 weeks ago
All the thought running: All the thought running through my head running through my head, silent screams, broken dreams, tears and heart tears regrets are sobering and cumbersome when trying to find pieces of peace... Well written inspiring! 
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SSmoothie commented on: Owner of my Prison by Tortured_Poet 1 year 26 weeks ago
Oh the torture of the poet,: Oh the torture of the poet, it has to be beautiful, but it doesn't, it has to be masterful, but it doesn't. it has to rhyme but it doesn't have to or it does and off with the rolling clouds goes that perfect line, while debating never to be seen again to perhaps some other poet who did not judge it and just let it ride... yesI get cha. Nice free write flows great! Nice one!  
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Pungus commented on: Thru Vagabond Valleys by humanfruit 1 year 26 weeks ago
Smokin' on the Crow's Nest: Setting surf with bloodstream cursed
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Teytonon commented on: Owner of my Prison by Tortured_Poet 1 year 26 weeks ago
On writing : This is very good, especially from someone who hasn't written anything in a while. Writing can be tough. As the old sportswriter Red Smith used to say  'All you have to do is sit down at a typewriter, cut open a vein, and bleed'. Keep on bleeding!
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Tortured_Poet commented on: Haiku melt by SSmoothie 1 year 26 weeks ago
This is very well written and: This is very well written and unique. I really like the style you chose, haikus can be fun
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